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Post by flora on May 20, 2006 17:43:54 GMT
WELL U TALK ABOUT IT LIKE EVERYDAY
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Post by 28 on May 20, 2006 18:55:10 GMT
THAT'S 'CAUSE IT ROCKS!
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Post by flora on May 26, 2006 1:35:09 GMT
WELL HOW SOULD I KNO IF I HAVENT SEEN IT EH?!?!?
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Post by 28 on May 30, 2006 1:11:39 GMT
You should come over some time and watch it.
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Post by flora on Jun 15, 2006 22:27:06 GMT
oi..
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Post by 06 on Jun 18, 2006 9:14:41 GMT
HEY! WHAT HAPPENED TO TEH STORY?!
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Post by 28 on Jun 21, 2006 23:15:05 GMT
I SWEAR TO YOU I WOULD WRITE A CHAPTER BUT I HAVE TO GO IN 5 MINUTES!
I'M SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I COMMAND YOU! BOTHER ME UNTIL I STOP BEING A LAZY BUMZ!
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Post by 06 on Jun 22, 2006 15:39:55 GMT
This is going to be fun. >D *puts you in bothering machine* I'll leave you in there until you write. >D
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Post by flora on Jul 2, 2006 20:38:54 GMT
hehehhee
ooooooo ummmmmmm ......
GAHHHHH
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Post by 06 on Jul 3, 2006 13:32:35 GMT
*turns up dial on bothering machine* HURRY UP! >D
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Post by 28 on Jul 5, 2006 0:35:31 GMT
AFTER MUCH TREACHEROUS WAITING, I GIVE YOU..........
Chapter 16.
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Ember Porto stood in front of the sector V treehouse, fireballs in each hand. She sighed and walked in. "The door isn't even locked.........wow. This is going to be MUCH easier than I anticipated." Ember glanced around the room and checked the picture. "Hmmmmm........let's see........where is he........." Just then, Numbuh 5 walked down the hall. She saw Ember and froze. "Who're you?" Ember looked at Abigail. "None of your buisness, girl. Now, out of my way. I've got buisness here." Abby stood her mark. "Nu-uh, sistuh. Numbuh 5 ain't movin' till she knows who ya are." The flaming girl sighed. She threw a fireball at her opponent and surrounded her in a wall of fire. Abby was paralyzed in shock, her eyes wide. "Don't bother me again, or I don't bother going around you." With that, the girl raced off.
Nigel Uno sat on the ground, just staring. Staring at an empty world. Empty and full of suffering. The british boy looked at his hands. They shook, as if they had a will of their own. 'Leave me alone.......' Nigel thought. 'Just leave me alone.........please........just let me live..........let me live a normal life.........why did you have to do this to me?' Nigel couldn't hold it in any longer. He didn't cry loudly.....he never did. But eternal tears seemed to stream down his cheeks. 'I hate this,' he thought. "I hate this...." he murmered. "I.......I HATE THIS!" Nigel threw himself on the ground. "JUST LEAVE ME ALONE! LET ME LIVE! WHATEVER YOU ARE........DON'T YOU GET IT? I'VE LEARNED WHATEVER LESSON YOU WANTED TO TEACH ME! IT'S DONE, I TELL YOU! DONE! WHY DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND THAT?" The boy broke into sobs and clenched his fists. "I hate you........I hate you, I hate you......I hate EVERYTHING!"
Eleonora didn't have to be far away to hear this. Nigel's words echoed in her mind, each one hurting like a stab in the chest. 'Please don't give up, Nigel......please.........I have to find you.........you can't give up. Not now......not ever. Don't fail on me.......I love you.'
Nigel suddenly felt a jolt of energy. What had just happened? It was as if somebody was giving him strength......somebody somewhere cared. Actually cared. Or...........unless.........yes. That was it, wasn't it? Just another stupid mirage......or vision..........or some crazy thing.........like everything else. 'Great.........even the good things are bad. Just.......great. Why do I have to suffer...........' "JUST KILL ME!" Nigel screamed. "PLEASE! JUST KILL ME NOW! I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE! I............I...........I'd rather die...........I want to die........please.........kill me.............."
"If you insist," a voice said. Nigel instantly became aware of the person behind him and whirled around. He saw the blazing girl before him, holding a sword at his throat. "Who knew you actually WANTED me to do this? HA! This is cash without effort!" Nigel looked up. "You---you're an--" "Assasin, yes. Ember Porto. It's not as if you'll ever hear my name again.......no harm telling you." Nigel looked up. "I.........I........just.........get this over with.........just kill me. I'll be happy when it's all over." Ember laughed. "Well, if you'll be happy......."
"NO!" Ember darted her head towards a shaking Eleonora. "St---stay---aw---aw---a---y---ff--fr--from--him---" the girl raised a brow. "What're you afriad of, little girl? THIS?" Ember threw a ball of fire at Eleonora. She screamed and darted away. Tears came to her eyes as she stared at the blazing nightmare. Eleonora had been deathly afriad of fire ever since the great evil had killed her mother and sister. Even a match could cause the British girl to shake for hours. "I---I---I'm----no---not----af---afraid----" Nigel looked at Eleonora. Why would she come to save him like this? She was on ITS side........the thing that was torturing him.........wasn't she?
"L--let---N--AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" A fireball had hit Eleonora on the shoulder. She collapsed, her shoulders shaking with sobs. Nigel started to stand up. "Wai--aaahhh......." the sword had made a small cut in the flesh of his neck. "Look, you. I'm not going to back off just because you're reconsidering life. I'm here to kill you, and that's what I'm going to do. So if you won't hold still, I'm gonna have to MAKE YOU!" Ember hit Nigel with another fireball across the chest. He was thrown onto the ground beside Eleonora, breathing heavily. "Eleonora..........you...........came............to..........." The girl shut her eyes. "You don't deserve this, Nigel......I thought I could help......but........" Eleonora trailed off. Her voice barely came as a whisper. Nigel tried to hold Eleonora's hand, but he was too weak. "No........Eleonora......don't.........go........please........I need you...........help.........me........." Eleonora coughed. "I think it's too late, Nigel. If I tried to look in your mind, I'd........" Eleonora realized Nigel had started to cry again. She was losing her strength quickly, but she had to try. Eleonora shut her eyes and slowly reached towards Nigel. She held his hand. "I'll try to help......Nigel........I..............wi..................will..............."
Eleonora dove deep into the corners of Nigel's mind. She had never done this before. Yes, something was definitely wrong. She sensed a disturbance like nothing else. It was strong........too strong! Eleonora felt Nigel's mind......taking.........over...........TAKING OVER HERS! "Nigel.......NIGEL! LET GO!" Eleonora tried to pull her hand away from Nigel's. The power of his insanity was giving her strength, but it gave her TOO much. Worse than that, it was taking Nigel's away from him. "Let go, Nigel. PLEASE!" "I.............can't............." "No.......Nigel...........don't.........Nigel....................NIGEL!"
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Post by flora on Jul 5, 2006 0:44:02 GMT
GASP
TIS EMBER THE ONE WHO------
...wait
i wont tell but ... nahhh
eheheh
this is getting goooood
(there was somthing else... OH YEA)
ABOUT TIME!!!!!
thats all
flora
out
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Post by 28 on Jul 5, 2006 3:02:41 GMT
YAYZ!
And......thanks for pointing out my typos, flora.
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Post by 06 on Jul 5, 2006 16:22:50 GMT
EMBER IZ EVILLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I HATE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes I know who she is...BUT SHE'S EVIL!!!!!
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Post by 28 on Jul 5, 2006 16:40:30 GMT
Yeeessss............eeeevvviilll............
CHAPTUH 17!
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Nigel couldn't keep his eyes open any longer. He felt Eleonora's hand in his, shaking. Her screams echoed in his mind.......his tears burned his eyes........ he heard noises.........saw blurry figures..........who........what............were.............and then............
.................Nothing.
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Sector V gathered rushed to the scene just intime to see Eleonora lose consciousness. Numbuh 4 took one look and ran over to Nigel. He shook his leader as fast as he could. "Wake up, Numbuh 1! ..........wake up..............." Ember laughed behind the team. "Wake up? You think he's SLEEPING? That's children for you. Me oh my.........he's DEAD, you imbiciles! You think I wouldn't do my job right? WRONG! Honestly. You'd best let it go. He isn't going anywhere." With that, the assasin dissapeared out the window.
Walabee Beatles ran after his opponent, his tears flying out of his eyes with the wind. "MURDERER!" he screamed. Before he could go any farther, he felt a hand grab his hood. "NOO! LET GO! I'LL KILL HER! LET GOOO!" Walabee collapsed into sobs. He turned around to see Kuki, with a comforting hand on his shoulder. She was crying as well. "Wally........killing her isn't going to help Numbuh 1.......just let her go." "NO! AHVE GOTTA..........N--NO!" Numbuh 5 stepped up to Numbuh 4, followed by Numbuh 2, who had just recovered from the hit Numbuh 1 gave him. "Let it go, Numbuh 4." Abby said, her voice quivering and turning into a whisper. "Just let it go."
Hoagie tried to swallow his tears as he walked towards Nigel's lifeless body. He slowly bent down and held his friend's hand.....felt his pulse.........wait..........his..............
"GUYS! GUYS! HE'S ALIVE!" Abby rushed over immediately at Hoagie's words. "What do we do? What do we do?" Kuki said frantically. Abigail looked at her best friend. "Let's get 'im to moonbase, ah guess." Hoagie nodded and picked Nigel up. He ran off to get a plane.
Walabee looked at Hoagie's running figure. 'Yer gonna be okay now, Numbuh 1.......' he thought, trying to be confident. 'Please be okay......Eleono--ELEONORA!" It was then Wally realized they had completely forgotten about Eleonora. "Numbuh 5, wha' abou' her?" Abby stared down at the figure of Eleonora Ie, her eyes twitching. "Oh, man.......Numbuh 5 can't believe she forgot.......ahll get Eleonora into the ship. Numbuh 4, come with me. Numbuh 3, call moonbase, BU' DO IT FAST. Got it?" Walabee and Kuki nodded as they ran off. Kuki stopped and waved to Wally. "Say hi to Numbuh 1 for me..........when he wakes up........." Walabee nodded. "See ya, Kuki......" "Let's GO, Numbuh 4!"
And with that, the plan went into action.
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Back at moonbase, there was a rush to get the two British operatives to safety. Mary-Ann Blossom, the head of Medical tactics, insisted on taking Eleonora herself, as they had been best friends for as long as she could remember and the case seemed serious enough. As for Nigel, almost everybody said they had absolutely no idea what was going on with him, although they would try.
Mary-Ann came out of the medical wing. Her eyes looked puffy, as if she had been crying. "Nigel has a chance. A slight chance, but a chance none the less." Walabee clenched his fists. "What about Eleonora?" Hoagie asked. Abby elbowed him suggesting she wanted to say, 'you idiot, why do you think she's cryin', huh?' Mary-Ann's eyes welled up and she ran back into the wing. "Hey........I didn't know.........come on..........wait, where'd Numbuh 4 go?"
Walabee stood before the unconscious figure of his leader. He wanted to say something, but he didn't know what. What COULD he say? Nigel probably couldn't hear him anyway.........just then, Wally heard a cough. Nigel opened his eyes and stared at Numbuh 4. "W---------" "Yer okay........" Nigel winced and slowly sat up. "Where's........where's Eleonora?" Walabee remembered Mary-Ann's reaction. It could only mean one thing. "Uhhh.......wull..........see..........there was this thing..........an'................"
"Numbuh 4, WHERE IS SHE?" Walabee gulped. "She.........she's...........ahm.......ahm sorry.....she's.........." Nigel started crying. Crying, like he had done whenever something went wrong. Eleonora........she........he'd never.........see.........her...........again.............all the things she did for him.......and now this........wait. He hadn't had any visions since he woke up.....no strange noises........THE INSANITY WAS GONE! Everything that had haunted him was gone. But how? How was it possible? Wait.....when they held hands......had it gone into Eleonora? And killed her? "Numbuh 4.......I need to see Eleonora one last time. Could you take me to her?" Walabee nodded. "Sure, mate."
Nigel looked at Eleonora. Gone. Vanished. Dead. He took her head in his hands and ran his hand through her hair. "Eleonora...........you........you saved me. I.......I've been so stupid.......and selfish.......you needed me..........and I didn't even know it." Nigel closed his eyes and let the tears fall. "I wish you had never let me........do what I did............I wish you were here........why.......why did you.......have to die.........for me........t--to live........Eleonora...........
I love you."
"I love you too, Nigel."
Nigel's eyes practically popped out of his skull. That was Eleonora's voice........in his mind. But.......that meant..........he was still insane. It was never over........Eleonora will never be back. Nigel had lost her.......and it was his fault.
"No, Nigel.......it was mine."
Eleonora's voice came again..........but this time, it was real.
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I've gotta say I don't think I did a good job here........XD
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