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Post by 06 on Apr 15, 2006 9:54:22 GMT
Why?
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Post by flora on Apr 15, 2006 19:05:37 GMT
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Post by 06 on Apr 15, 2006 20:13:54 GMT
Oh well...
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Post by 28 on Apr 17, 2006 4:08:51 GMT
OMG I have to sign that cast.....
Can't miss out......
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Post by 444 on Apr 17, 2006 9:48:23 GMT
444 + 6- ...?
444- ...*shrugs* Your story's cool.
6- A person on FF.net totally adores your story 28. Someone called 'ActionGal' said, "Ingenius. Truly amazing, every word I've read here. You got to continue this, cause its masterpieces like this that are rare to read these days." Cool, huh?
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Post by 28 on Apr 18, 2006 0:02:56 GMT
OMG WEEEEEEE!
Now I feel loved.....I've gotta......do chapter.......14!
Wow.......it has been a LOOONG time. Anyway, 1 and 28 just kissed. Update.
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"Eleonora..." "Nigel...." "I didn't mean to..." "I was....." The two looked at each other. Looked for what seemed like an eternity. The british children suddenly found themselves crying. This whole mess....this whole STUPID mess had broken their relationship. Eleonora felt as if she had made a promise she couldn't keep, while Nigel felt like he had destroyed everyone he loved. "Nigel, I'm going to help you." Nigel smiled slightly. "If I can be helped..." He said softly. Eleonora swallowed her tears. "No," she said. There weren't any other words that would come out of her mouth. "No." Nigel understood. Eleonora lifted up her hand and touched Nigel's head. He felt it---but not as he wanted to. Eleonora's hand was on fire. Huge and flaming, running across his head.
She had set him on fire.
Nigel screamed and ran. This time he WAS going to die. The fire running across his head....was the bitter pain of defeat. The ladder, the rain, the fire--all of this had won. Before he blacked out, he thought to himself, 'I lost.'
The light came back. Nigel was on the floor of the treehouse. But what surprised him was the fact that he was alive. He sat up and looked around. He felt his head. 'No more fire,' he thought. Maybe it was just like everything else---it happened, it went away. But this time he fainted. This time, it was real. There were other parts to it, too. Eleonora, for example. What had went on there? Was she a monster? Or was it just him.......
"WHY DOESN'T ANYTHING MAKE SENSE?" Nigel threw himself on the ground once more. He couldn't take this. He didn't know what was going on. Had the world gone crazy? Had HE gone crazy? All Nigel wanted to do was cry. He wanted to cry until nothing mattered. Eleonora couldn't help him after all. Nobody could help him. Nobody.
Eleonora Ie let her tears run down her face. 'I felt it......I felt it......' When Eleonora had kissed Nigel, she felt something wrong with his mind. The truth was---he had gone insane. She didn't know how to explain it, but he definitely wasn't himself. 'I should have told him the truth.....I'm such an idiot.' Eleonora, of course, was not an idiot, but she found herself a horrible one. 'Why didn't I just tell him?' Eleonora looked at the path Nigel took when he ran. She knew that she had made the biggest mistake of her life, because Nigel had run off. She would never get to try to help him....
And he would be insane forever.
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OH YEAH! I DID IT! CHAPTER 14! IT'S AWESOME! 1/28NESS! WOO!
REVIEW, PEOPLEZ!
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Post by 06 on Apr 18, 2006 14:10:19 GMT
='(
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
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All of it's up on FF.net btw.
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by flora on Apr 18, 2006 21:04:05 GMT
DAHH!!!!!!!!!! ... umm....? anyway FINALLY its been like wat 2-3 months of talking? 28!!!  u should write more frequetly!! (i have no idea if that made any sense at all...) well the good thing is that u wrote it (FINALLY) |
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Post by 28 on Apr 18, 2006 21:19:41 GMT
I wanna see it, but........but..........but.........
I DON'T HAVE AN ACCOUNT, AND YOU HAVE TO BE LOGGED IN!
WAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
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Post by 06 on Apr 23, 2006 19:13:14 GMT
Sorry that sucks.
That story made me cry.
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Post by flora on Apr 24, 2006 19:44:48 GMT
ummm 28 ur too late to sign it
WOOT
IM FREE
TO BEND MY KNEES
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Post by 28 on Apr 24, 2006 22:22:12 GMT
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!
Oh well.....at least I can make knee bending jokes!
YOU HAVE TO BEND YOUR KNEEEEES!
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Post by squirrelmonkey57 on Apr 25, 2006 2:41:02 GMT
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WUV IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by 28 on Apr 26, 2006 1:58:30 GMT
OH GOSH! I LUV YOU! *huggles*
SOOOOO HAPPY I GOT ANOTHER REVIEWER!
You know what? My ONLY reviewer on fanfic.net thought I ended the story! GOSH! I would NEVER do that to Nigie. NEVER.
CHAPTER 15!
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It was dark.
It was raining.
But fire was in the forest.
Five children walked up to the flames they saw. These flames were their key to victory. These children had planned to do what they were about to go through for 5 years. 5 treacherous, grueling years of humiliation of defeat. But with the help of the figure in front of them, they would succeed.
They would finally kill Nigel Uno.
"Excuse me?" All the children said in unison. The figure turned around to reveal a girl with green hair made of flames. She wore a red tanktop and white bellbottoms, scorched and torn. The girl was englufed in flames. "What the crud....." The girl looked at the five children with disgust. "What the crud ARE you?" She finished. It was true--the children had a slightly odd appearence. Their eyes were a vacant blue, they spoke in unison, and they seemed to be morphed into a single organism.
"We call ourselves the delightful children from down the lane." Said the delightful children. "We seek your help with something of great importance." The girl raised a brow. "What kind of something?" The delightful children smirked. "We need someone.....taken care of." The girl smiled widely. "So, who will it be?" One of the five children pulled a picture out of her pocket. "Here he is." They all said together. "Wow, he's ugly." The girl wrinkled her nose. The delightful children laughed. "He's pesky, too. We need him eliminated." The girl tossed her head. Flames flew everywhere, nearly missing the children. "What's in it for me?" she said, looking closely at the rain-soaked evildoers. The children pulled out a sack of money. "Will this cover it?" They asked. The girl smirked. "He's history." she said as the flames around her burned brighter.
"Suki."
"Kinmu."
"Mushimushi."
"Shi."
"HEY, NOW I HAVE TO START WITH 'SHI' AGAIN! CHEATER!" Kuki Sanban shouted at Walabee. Since Nigel left the room, the two had been playing a Japanese word game where one player says a word, and the other says a different word beginning with the previous one's ending syllible. For example, if your opponent's word ended with 'mu,' you'd have to start your word with 'mu'. If your word ended with 'shi', your opponent's word would have to begin with 'shi', and so on and so forth.
"Wull......wull, I dunno any more words in Japanese." Walabee protested. Kuki looked dissapointed. "I wish I was back home..." she said. The Asian girl slouched on the bed Nigel had been in. "Home?" "In Osaka," Kuki explained. "I lived there with my 6 sisters and my parents. When I moved, I left Kimiko, Kurei, Nami, and Yume behind. Mushi came with us, but that's it. Walabee did the math for 5 minutes, then said. "But tha only adds up ta....ta five." He said with a hint of pride. "Well, Mari was born after we moved to Cleaveland. She's still a baby." Kuki sighed again. "I'm glad I can talk to you, Wally. When I first moved I couldn't speak English OR make friends...." "NO WAY!" Walabee blurted out. Kuki looked at him with surprise. "It's jus' tha...Kuki, yur so nice! Who wouldn' wanna be friends with ya?" Kuki's smile could barely be contained on her face. She hugged Walabee with such force that it looked like a tackle. "OH, WALLY!" She said. Walabee's face turned into a cherry tomato. Kuki hadn't ever hugged him like this in her life. "You're really nice too!" The girl said, her black hair bouncing around her head because of her happiness. "I'm glad I know you...." "Yeah.....heh.....same....."
The two children looked at each other, smiling wider than ever.
Meanwhile, Nigel Uno sat alone on the ground, crying. He didn't want to go through with all this....all this.....frustration-ness.
'Frustration-ness. That's not a word.' thought Nigel.
'Who cares.' He thought after a silence. 'I'm going to die anyway, I can use as many stupid words as I want.' Nigel thought about those first four words; 'I'm going to die.....I'm going to die.......' He didn't want to believe it, but at the same time.....he wanted to......'What's going on, Nigel!? What's wrong with you!? You don't even know what your own thoughts are anymore, why are you trying to figure this out?' Great. Even his mind was against him.
But what if it was the only thing against him? What if it was all in his head? "Insanity." said Nigel. "This is insanity. That's what it is. The world is insane, my friends are insane, I'M insane. And helpless. We mustn't forget that......I'm helpless and weak." All these thoughts were new to Nigel. He had always been strong, powerful....never scared. Why did his life have to be so horrible all of a sudden? WHY?
"WHY, ELEONORA, WHY?" Eleonora still wasn't forgiving herself. She had ruined Nigel's life....HER life. Ruined it. Destroyed it. Smashed it. Obliterated it. Conquered it. Doomed it. Dashed it.
Ended it.
Eleonora thought she had ended it. She thought there was no hope for Nigel. But she was wrong. For one of the first times in her life, Eleonora Ie was wrong. Nigel's life wasn't in danger.
Not yet.
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OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH!
REVIEW, PEOPLEZ! PWEEESE!
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Post by squirrelmonkey57 on Apr 28, 2006 23:31:20 GMT
woah. M-AY-ZING!!!!!! I WUV IT!!!!! MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
one thing just for fun if nigel was reading this i wanna cheer him up (i no he's not reading this or anything and he's not real but i wanna type this anyway!) if the worlds insane and his friends are insane and he's insane, everyones normal!! YAY!
(not critisising jsut wanted to type that! :DD)
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