cherrycutie1and5
2x4 Technologist
It'z hard to say that everything will be okay...
Posts: 580
|
Post by cherrycutie1and5 on Jul 3, 2007 23:52:01 GMT
Yeah...Such a cool story
|
|
|
Post by camper on Jul 4, 2007 18:43:07 GMT
Wow, what a funny fiction when bodies switched. I wonder what would happen when they want to use the bathroom. Anyway, I'm also quite confused between the switched operatives unless you put references such as Numbuh 3 in Numbuh 4's body as written as "Numbuh three (4)", a bracket to show she's in Numbuh 4's body, so that it will not create confusions. Hope you'll do that.
|
|
|
Post by 62 on Aug 14, 2007 17:22:18 GMT
that's a good Idea I'm gonna do that ^_^ thanks very much guys! sry it's been so long since I've updated I've had a busy summer XD
Part 7
“HEY WHAT’S THE MISSION IS THERE A MISSION WHEN’S THE MISSION?” said Numbuh Four (3) trying to imitate Numbuh Three’s hyperactivity. “I don’t care as long as there’s action!” said Numbuh Three (4). “I believe it’s for trying to get ourselves back to normal.” said Numbuh Two (1). “But how do you expect us to fight when we’re out of the norm?” said Numbuh One (5). “Kids next door always have their skills! With or without their normal look!” said Numbuh Two (1) imitating Numbuh One.
suddenly Numbuh Two about sat at his driver’s seat but realized he would loose the bet.
“Get driving Numbuh Two.” said Numbuh Two (1) enjoying himself. “Numbuh Five’s going already, uh I mean okey-dokey or whatever it is Numbuh Two’d say.” said Numbuh Five (2) almost sick of the bet but figuring she could go on a bit longer.
however being the driver was not quite what Numbuh Five wanted but she did it anyhow, even if it was a very bumpy ride for the rest of them.
“WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” shouted Numbuh Four (3) again mocking Numbuh Three who was sitting down annoyed.
Suddenly their ship began shaking; there was something wrong with the controls.
“What’s going on?” said Numbuh Three (4) now half way up her chair holding on to it tightly. “I have no idea.” said Numbuh Five (2).
Numbuh Two immediately forgot the bet and took the wheel.
“Numbuh Two what’s wrong?!” said Numbuh One (5). “I don’t know, it’s moving by itself!” said Numbuh Two (1) desperately trying to pull the wheel up before they crashed.
Numbuh Four tried grabbing his seat but the sleeves over his hands made it hard to and he didn’t have enough time to pull them up. They were coming down hard so hard the door flung open by pure force, when they landed they didn’t understand what was going on everything seemed strange. All of them were either flung back on their seats or stuck between the floor and the seats. Numbuh Two was the first to get up he was not harmed as much because he had a pretty good grip on that wheel but a few of the members of sector V were injured.
“What was that all about? Numbuh One sure had a scare.” said Numbuh One (5) then realizing he spoke in a third person. “What the heck? I didn’t even mean to say that.”
Numbuh Four landed upside down on his head.
“Ouch.” He said (3) as he pulled himself right side up then he slipped hitting his face because he forgot he had sleeves on. “I am so going to get the people who did this.” said Numbuh Three (4). “It’s ok Numbuh Three you don’t have to worry about the bet right now.” said Numbuh Two (1). “I seriously don’t know why I said that.” said Numbuh Three (4) feeling awkward.
When all of them got up they were brushed a little and all of them felt a little strange.
“I wonder what could have caused the controls to stop working.” thought Numbuh Two (1). When they got outside they realized a house sitting in the distance, it was Father’s house only about a few blocks ahead.
“I should have known.” said Numbuh Two (1).
Some of sector didn’t realize it, but they were out of their character, Numbuh Three all of a sudden got an attitude, Numbuh Four didn’t notice anything going on, Numbuh One couldn’t stop speaking in a third person and he was more laid-back, Numbuh Five was all of a sudden worrying about the ship and how they were going to get back, and Numbuh Two was getting more and more obsessive over Father and the mission. Something was going terribly wrong they were becoming more and more like the people they were switched with, but they were only slightly catching on to this.
Numbuh Two stormed in the direction of the house leading the way as the others followed behind wondering why he seemed all hoped up today, course it almost seemed as if it was Numbuh One since Numbuh Two was still switched along with the others.
“So how are we going to pulverize them for switching us?” said Numbuh Three (4). “Numbuh Three you can stop talking like Numbuh Four now, the mission’s on.” said Numbuh Two (1). “But I can’t.” argued Numbuh Three (4).
|
|
|
Post by camper on Aug 15, 2007 5:15:40 GMT
Wow, mission started, but still, I wonder how does the whole thing going to run well afterwards.
|
|
|
Post by 62 on Aug 17, 2007 3:15:50 GMT
thank you very much =D here's another part! ^^
Part 8
“Sure you can just talk normal.” said Numbuh One rolling his eyes (5). “No I seriously can’t.” said Numbuh Three (4).
Numbuh One looked at her strangely.
“Sing the rainbow monkey song Numbuh Three.” said Numbuh One (5) trying to figure out what was up.
Numbuh Three started singing but it all came out wrong.
“Rainbow dorkeys! I hate them they’re so lame!” said Numbuh Three (4) then screaming at what she said.
She turned around facing Numbuh Four.
“THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!” said Numbuh Three (4).
The other three’s eyes were opened in surprise, now they were more confused as ever. And four of them freaked out when they saw Numbuh Four was humming while holding one of the things he totally hated as his normal self, a rainbow monkey.
“Ok let’s all stay calm, Numbuh One’ll come up with a plan.” said Numbuh One (5) realizing it was affecting him too.
Numbuh Five looked panicked.
“I don’t wanna turn into Numbuh Two for the rest of my life.” said Numbuh Five (2). “It’s alright I’m sure if we find Father we will find out how he did this to us, but for now I’ll call up moon-base.” said Numbuh Two (1) opening the wristwatch Numbuh One had on but he had access to.
When Numbuh Three-Sixty-Two answered she looked urgently at Numbuh Two (who she thought was Numbuh One)
“Help! Help! Emergency!” said Numbuh Three-Sixty-Two. “What’s wrong Numbuh Three-Sixty-Two!” said Numbuh Two (1). “That’s just it! I’M NOT NUMBUH THREE-SIXTY-TWO! The whole moon-base has been switched around! Everyone’s not everyone! I know this sounds crazy but I’m Numbuh Eighty-Six!” she said.
Numbuh Two looked alarmed.
“And we’re trapped inside this moon-base because all our ships have been stolen! Somebody gave us a super-code-red-alert and we’re all here and can’t get out!” said Numbuh Eighty-Six (362). “And nobody can build new ones cause our mechanics are all acting crazy like everyone else!” “Do any of you know how this happened? Try to calm down.” said Numbuh Two (1). “The ray Father was building, I think he’s behind all of this! You guys are the only sector not on moon-base you need to get to him right now! And don’t mess up like a stupid boy would!” said Numbuh Eighty-Six (362).
It went to end transmission after she finished speaking and now they knew this would be a problem.
“I know what’s going on now!” said Numbuh Five (2). “I knew there was something wrong with the ship, he must have hacked into our hardware and got control of all the ships the kids next door own, that must be how he made us crash and how he made the other ships leave the moon-base.” “If that’s true he’s bound to know we’re around.” said Numbuh One. (5). “Numbuh Three-Sixty-Two has broken her way in undetected before and we’ve gotten inside before as well we just need a distraction.” said Numbuh One (5).
Everyone directly looked at Numbuh Four.
“Oh no no no, nah ah, nope, no way!” said Numbuh Four (3) hesitantly. “Ha! Guess there’s a little Numbuh Four left in there after all.” said Numbuh Five (2). “I’m not doing it.” said Numbuh Four (3) repeating his answer.
Numbuh Five smiled.
“Well ok then, I guess you’ll just have to be Kuki for the rest of your life.” said Numbuh Five (2) confident he would go through with it. “Fine.” said Numbuh Four (3) mumbling as he approached the mansion.
The cameras on the outside windows suddenly fixated on Numbuh Four as he just randomly tried to get their attention. The rest of sector V rushed to get inside one of the open windows hoping they wouldn’t be noticed. Father was inside watching his plan come to action, it turns out he was behind it all after all but he however expected all of the kids next door operatives to be on moon-base so he wasn’t really prepared for anything. Suddenly his attention was grabbed when he saw what looked to be Numbuh Three dancing at his front door saying “HAHAHAHAHA-HA! YOU CAN’T CATCH ME CAUSE YOU ARE UHH INSIDE! NANANANANA-NA! COME GET ME CAUSE…I’M UHH DISTRACTING YOU! HA! BET YOU DIDN’T SEE THAT ONE COMING!”
“That is the stupidest things I’ve ever heard, now why would some little girl come up and…wait…did she just say distracting me?!” said Father noticing something was going on.
Father got up and walked outside giving off a Flaming era looking very annoyed.
“What are you distracting me from?!” said Father looking around trying to find the reason behind Numbuh Four’s crazy looking dancing (witch he wasn’t very good at he constantly tripped over himself because he just couldn’t get used to Numbuh Three yet.)
Father looked very angry from being interrupted and annoyed. Numbuh Four smiled nervously.
“Ummm nothing.” said Numbuh Four (3) slowly backing away. “Great job Numbuh Four.” said Numbuh One (5) quietly as he jumped inside the window now knowing the owner of the house’s radar was up now.
|
|
|
Post by camper on Aug 17, 2007 3:30:46 GMT
I see, now things are getting nasty afterwards.
|
|
|
Post by Darrel Samaitha419 on Aug 17, 2007 9:04:17 GMT
Cool!! ;D
|
|
|
Post by faircod1965 on Aug 20, 2007 16:45:31 GMT
This story is getting even more exciting.
|
|
|
Post by 62 on Aug 20, 2007 17:55:42 GMT
thank you all! here's another part sry it's a bit short ^^
Part 9
Half way inside the mansion Numbuh Three tripped making loud “CRAAAAASH” as she picked herself back up.
“Sorry.” said Numbuh Three (4) with an innocent look.
Numbuh One was just getting more and more annoyed with the way things were going and they had no idea what Numbuh Four was doing.
“I wasn’t really distracting you.” said Numbuh Four (3) using Kuki’s puppy dog eyes to his advantage. “Fine fine fine just don’t look at me like that, now what do you want?! Are you trying to break into my mansion or are trying to sell me something or something?” said Father who was thoroughly confused. “Yeah that’s what I was doing! I’m here to uhhhh sell you cookies?” said Numbuh Four (3). “Alright then, where are they?” said Father tapping his foot about done with this game. “Oh right I must have dropped them back there, oh well better luck next time.” said Numbuh Four (3) trying to run off.
But Father picked him up by his sleeve having him squirm alarmed.
“I don’t believe you.” said Father.
Numbuh Four gulped nervously.
“Think Numbuh Four, if you were a girly-girl how would you get out of something?” thought Numbuh Four (3).
Suddenly Numbuh Four started crying waterfalls making a perfect distraction cause now Father was even more freaked out. Inside the mansion five kids just walked by them not even noticing the four kids lying outside the open window.
“Whew that was close!” said Numbuh Three (4). “Huh?!” said the five kids in unison now seeing sector V. “Great! Now the delightful Children heard us.” said Numbuh One (5) griddling his teeth. “What are you doing here?” said the delightful children surprised till Numbuh Three shouting something. “Hey! Look over there!” said Numbuh Three (4).
They turned their heads and when they looked back sector V was gone.
“Nice job Numbuh Three.” said Numbuh Five (2) while racing into the long hallway with the other operatives.
Father was still freaked with Numbuh Four’s waterworks he was wide-eyed and confused.
“Uhh please stop uhhh I’ll buy your cookies? I mean uhhhhhhhhhhh.” said Father simply backing away going inside his house. “Well that was strange, I’m going to go take a nap and watch the moon-base blow up or something.”
Numbuh Four proudly stood up snacking his hands together impressed with his acting.
“Wow who knew being a girl could give you an advantage-” started Numbuh Four but he again tripped over himself landing on the floor in front of the mansion again. “And it’s disadvantages.”
|
|
|
Post by camper on Aug 21, 2007 1:53:32 GMT
Wow, things are not going to be very good from time to time. What next?
|
|
|
Post by 62 on Sept 12, 2007 22:19:31 GMT
lol here's the last part, sorry this whole story's been kinda random and it kinda ends off randomly, sry if it's odd but I'm an odd person (lol) anyway hope the story's ok random as it is XD
Part 10
Father came back inside sitting in his living room chair.
“That was the weirdest girl-scout.” said Father humorously.
Father put his hands behind his back expecting to relax and simply stare at the security camera’s screen that was till he noticed something amiss, the KND were in HIS HOUSE!
“DELIGHTFUL CHILDREN!” Father hollered angrily.
They showed up nervously noticing he wasn’t pleased.
“Y-y-yes Father?” they all said in unison. “Why are there other kids in my house?” said Father calmly. “Uhhhh we dunno?” said the Delightfuls. “And why are they trying to destroy my machine?” said Father again sounding calm.
Their response took a while.
“We…dunno?” they said with nervous smiles. “Well…WHY WEREN’T YOU WATCHING THEM?!” said Father. “Sorry!” said the Delightfuls who were sweating and still putting on that nervous grin. “Well go get them out of here already!” commanded Father.
The delightful Children scampered quickly out of the room searching for the group of trespassers.
“Numbuh One doesn’t like this.” said Numbuh One (5) annoyed with what he just said and then thinking “Darn! Why does she have to be so cool all the time with her talking, it doesn’t sound good when I say it.”
The KND quickly noticed the row of hallways, they had to search a bunch of rooms till they found the reason they were all switched with each other, a glowing ball much like the one Tommy destroyed when Father turned them all into animals on a previous mission, only it seemed it was rewired to switch sector members.
“Ooooooooooooo it’s a magical bouncy ball like the rainbow monkey had on the TV show!” said Numbuh Three (4) picking the orb up. “No Numbuh three!” warned Numbuh Two (1) in a loud whisper.
Numbuh Three grabbed the ball.
“NO!” said Numbuh Two (1) in a louder whisper. “What? If you want a turn then you’ll have to wait in line.” said Numbuh Three who was somewhat oblivious to the fact that was no ball for playing kick ball, it only looked that way.
The three sector members repeatedly told her to put it down and when she noticed them she put the ball down.
“Awww who wants to play with a cruddy rainbow monkey ball anyway.” said Numbuh Three (4) sitting down with her arms crossed. “Ok Numbuh One really doesn’t wanna even ask.” said Numbuh One (5).
Numbuh Five walked over and picked up the ball.
“Ok what should we do with this?” said Numbuh Five (2).
Numbuh Two stepped over about to lend a hand when suddenly Numbuh Four burst in.
“HI! GUYS!” said Numbuh Four (3) who looked a bit shook up. (He had fallen over himself many times not being used to Numbuh Three STILL) “Hi Kuki.” said Numbuh Three (4) then putting her hands over her mouth. “You’re not me I’m me, aren’t I?” “I don’t know but Numbuh One is not liking this, I’m having trouble remembering my mission training almost as if I’m somehow just forgetting off the bat.” said Numbuh One (5). “Maybe it’s this thing, but if we destroy it what will happen? What happens if it doesn’t switch us back?” said Numbuh Five (2). “Why the crud should we care?” said Numbuh Three (4). “Ok you’re really starting to freak me out, ‘I’ am Numbuh Four remember?” said Numbuh Four looking oddly at Numbuh Three. (Who of course in his eyes was himself only with Numbuh Three’s expression)
Things were getting more and more confusing, Numbuh Three was forgetting almost everything instantly and I’m sure things would be a whole lot more complicated if they forgot everything, Numbuh Two tried re-wiring it but he too was forgetting everything and it was harder and harder for him to fix things witch normally came easy to him. And something happened right out of the blue, the delightful children opened the den’s door seeing five operatives messing with their property.
“Do we even need to ask?” said the delightfuls. “YOU MESSED UP EVERYTHING! I AM GOING TO POUND YOU INTO NEXT THURSDAY!” said Numbuh Three (4) walking up pushing her sleeves back. “Wa?! What’d we do?” said the delightfuls crossing their arms. “You made us all switch with each other didn’t you?! Now I’m stuck in Numbuh Three’s cruddy girly self.” said Numbuh Four (3).
The delightful children were all wide-eyed.
“Ok…you’re all crazy.” they said backing up nervously; they were clearly unaware of Father’s devise.
As if things weren’t confusing enough Father burst in after hearing all the shouting, and now everyone was staring blankly at each other.
“Wait a minute you’re that crazy Girl Scout, or wait you’re the kids next door!” said Father.
Numbuh Five grabbed the orb and tossed it to Numbuh Three.
“I got it!” said Numbuh Three (4) catching it.
Father heated up and flames surrounded him.
“Why are you in my house?! GIVE THAT BACK!” he said chasing after Numbuh Three.
It all became a game of monkey in the middle only a lot more relied on him not catching them, Numbuh Four had hold of the orb.
“HAHA! TAG YOU’RE IT!” said Numbuh Four (3). (Who seemed to finally be effected by this whole matter, he was acting more like Numbuh Three).
And now things were going crazy Numbuh One was trying desperately to get a hold of the orb before Father; who was gaining on Numbuh Four.
Until, Numbuh Four just suddenly dropped it…it broke into a bumillion pieces and ended up everywhere then all five operatives were frozen in their poses and all of a sudden Numbuh Four stared looking his hands over.
“WOOOOHOOOO! NO SLEEVES! I’M ME AGAIN! NANANA-NA! I AM NUMBUH FOUR!” said Numbuh Four (4) celebrating the change back to himself.
Numbuhs One Two Thee and Five had also changed back.
Father was a little stunned then he was angry.
“GREAT!” he shouted sarcastically, and all of a sudden the house started shaking and then a ship landed right in the middle of his living room.
A scamper with dozens of operatives came right out of nowhere, the kids next door obviously weren’t happy, but they all seemed to be switched back as well.
“KIDS NEXT DOOR! Battle stations!” Numbuh Three-Sixty-Two shouted and a bunch of kids ambushed Father and the delightfuls.
Numbuh One parked right in front of Father with a ‘HA HA! I’m you FACE!’ expression.
“Anything you’d like to say Father?” said Numbuh Three-Sixty-Two. “Yes actually.” said Father with an odd smile. “Oh look! The Yipper and Rainbow Monkey convention’s over there!”
All the kids turned their heads, and then Father and the delightfuls were gone. Numbuh Eighty-Six started shouting at Numbuh One.
“STUPID BOY! WHY WOULD YOU TURN YOUR HEAD!” shouted Numbuh Eighty-Six.
Numbuh One just sighed.
“That’s defiantly the real Numbuh Eighty-Six.” said Numbuh Two to Numbuh Five. End Transmission
|
|
|
Post by camper on Sept 13, 2007 5:49:40 GMT
I see, whatever. But thank goodness is ended.
|
|
|
Post by Darrel Samaitha419 on Oct 7, 2007 12:12:30 GMT
Awsome! I love random ends! ;D
|
|
|
Post by faircod1965 on Oct 9, 2007 4:15:19 GMT
A brilliant happy ending to this story, I enjoyed it, every step of the way.
|
|
|
Post by 62 on Oct 10, 2007 18:05:31 GMT
THANK YOU VERY MUCH GUYS!! ^^
|
|