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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Apr 17, 2007 17:20:58 GMT
It's great! I want more now... You are very talented, 62..
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Post by 62 on Apr 17, 2007 23:06:31 GMT
thanks very much ^_^
here is the last part ^_^
Part 7
after the day was over Numbuh Four was ready to perform without resisting this time, Misses Thompson must have asked Numbuh Four elevendybumillion times where Kuki Sanban was but she always got a “She’ll be here.” that didn’t really satisfy her. Numbuh Four was dressed and ready, he was a blue vest and an orange collar shirt that made him feel very stupid but he didn’t complain this time. He went over to The Kid again.
“Flyboy do me a favor and tell Numbuh Three I’m sorry.” said Numbuh Four.
The Kid snickered.
“Well actually she’s already here right over there go tell her yourself but no chocking me if she leaves.” said The Kid going back to what he was doing.
Numbuh Three about ran off when she saw him coming but ran into a part of the stage.
“Ouch! That wasn’t there a minute ago.” said Numbuh Three rubbing her head. “Numbuh Three?” said Numbuh Four putting his hands behind his back nervously.
Numbuh Three turned her nose at him again.
“Umm I’m sorry for a few days ago, I guess I shouldn’t have made such a deal over everything.” said Numbuh Three. “Yeah well…you should go on stage and do your play.” said Numbuh Three still a bit upset. “Numbuh Three please? Ummmm will you come on stage and do the play with me? I really didn’t mean to…” asked Numbuh Four.
Numbuh Three looked down.
“You don’t want me on the play though, maybe you should go act with somebody else.” said Numbuh Three. “Kuki I don’t want anybody else I…I can’t do it without you.” said Numbuh Four with a nervous smile.
Numbuh Three put her hands together intertwining them with a sweet happy smile before she hugged him.
“OK I’LL DO IT!” said Numbuh Three laughing sweetly.
Numbuh Four blushed and pushed her off nervously.
“Ek! Enough with the mushy stuff.” said Numbuh Four.
A little while later Numbuh Three was sitting on the balcony in a purple and pink long dress, her hair was braded and she looked simply wonderful. The rest of Sector V were oblivious to the fact that Numbuh Three was found and were still looking in a vast ocean of rainbow monkey fans at the convention.
“If I go across the ‘Pretty Panda Warrior Wonderland’ again I’m going to throw up” said Numbuh Two. “Well at least it’s better then the ‘Cheery Sunday Castle’ that place gives Numbuh Five the creeps.” said Numbuh Five. “Me two.” said Numbuh One shivering.
back at school everybody was sitting in their seats Numbuh Four’s parents included as well as Numbuh Three’s parents and just about every kid’s parents that were in the play, the play went on for a while but Numbuhs Three and Four didn’t do much, until the lights went up and the spotlight shifted on top of Numbuh Three, Numbuh Four walked up shaking and sweating a lot feeling very strange.
“Romeo Romeo where for art thaw Romeo?” said Numbuh Three giggling a bit through the line.
Numbuh Four walked up and started climbing the ladder to the balcony.
“Here I am-whoa-whoa.” said Numbuh Four realizing his footing wasn’t perfect on the ladder.
Both he and the ladder were shaking; Numbuh Three leaned over at him trying to make it look like it was part of the play but by doing that Numbuh Four lost his balance and drug Numbuh Three down with him and the whole stage fell down along with them. Both The Kid and Misses Thompson about slapped their heads with their palms at the exact same time. The stage was ruined and paper was torn the ladder was laying upside-down the balcony torn in half and the background paper was torn also. The dust from the stage cleared and Numbuh Three was laying right on top of Numbuh Four both looking directly in the other’s eyes. Numbuh Four started blushing again, Numbuh Three was pretty red-cheeked too, she sat up and played with her hair giggling a little, Numbuh Four also laughed a bit at the whole experience. the people started clapping most of the audience was laughing thinking it was way better then a normal kids play, it wasn’t every day they saw Romeo drag Juliet bring upstage to down stage.
“Bravo!” most of them were saying while clapping.
Numbuhs Three and Four bowed along with the other kids in the play but the spotlight was still on the both of them.
“Told you I don’t know how to act.” said Numbuh Four to Numbuh Three. Numbuh Three burst out laughing then she hugged him.
“You sure don’t! And neither do I!” said Numbuh Three Happily. End Transmission
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Post by thetoughgirl on Apr 18, 2007 3:12:03 GMT
awwww!!! THE BEST EVER!!! LOVE IT WRITE more fanfics!!!!!
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Post by 62 on Apr 18, 2007 3:43:37 GMT
wow thank you so much! ^_^ maybe I will wen I come up with more ideas XD
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Post by faircod1965 on Apr 18, 2007 13:55:26 GMT
Great story and a fantastic ending, great fun.
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Post by dizma on Apr 18, 2007 14:45:46 GMT
and yous said, you couldn't think of a good fic.
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Post by 62 on Apr 18, 2007 14:47:23 GMT
thank you guys! ^_^
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Post by dizma on Apr 18, 2007 14:51:27 GMT
if that was the last chapter, will this thread close?
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Apr 18, 2007 16:29:50 GMT
Huray! You are great Fan Fick Writer... Maybe will you write ending for this FF.. Something like:
"When they came back into Treehouse..." ? xD
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Post by 62 on Apr 19, 2007 1:37:30 GMT
oh I kinda wrote it kinda short cause it was my first one, but I'm working on a sector V fanfiction called operation SWAP if I ever get the time to write it XD thank you all very much! ^_^
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Apr 19, 2007 19:16:34 GMT
You welcome, 62 .
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Post by dizma on Apr 24, 2007 6:32:46 GMT
i think i'm going for my first fic too...
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