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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Mar 17, 2007 4:01:30 GMT
Woah... It was pretty great... xD And you forget to say what will be in next chapter...
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Post by victor on Mar 17, 2007 21:28:17 GMT
Chapter 6: Delta.
The Grand Phoenix has reached the Calabash Nebula in 0805 Hours. The immense space station soared in the stars in this Galaxy. The Grand Phoenix then docks in the shipyards. A bridge comes and Nigel and team leave. The biggest defense contractor in the Galaxy, Phoenix Dynamics Inc has made several weapons and fighters for the Robin Government and other rich and wealthy governments in the Galaxy. Nigel on the others are greeted by the relatives of Vic who shake hands and so on. They head to the conference room to discuss the replacing of the Grand Phoenix and obtain a new Grand Phoenix II.
Meanwhile on the Whirlpool Galaxy on Planet Ubee 34
It was 3:00 A.M and Wally was on a shooting range with his trusty custom made Kitsune Rifle. The rifle was silver and gold painted, had a lighter weight and a magazine of 900 Plasma Rifle Bullets. Since there was no box magazine to be fitted in the rifle. The magazine was in a small rectangle that was feed in the right left side of the rifle. A hatch opens in the left side and the magazine is inserted.You're wondering how can many ionized projectiles fit in there: The secret is that the plasma bullets are a new technology found in the Whirlpool Galaxy which are Nano Plasma Bullets. These kind of projectiles are smaller, faster and deadlier compared to regular plasma bullets. Wally then aims and fires, this rifle was extremely accurate, it took Wally 7 months to dominate this fantastic, but yet powerful weapon.
It was agreed by Star Nigel and the Phoenixes. Star Nigel would get a new ship in three days and of course, upgraded Nightfires to suit their neeeds. Nigel hoped the new ship had the spirit of the Grand Phoenix and all of its characteristics.
3 Days later... the new ship was done. It was a brand new Phoenix-Class Battleship. The Phoenix-Class Battlecruiser was decommisioned (meaning it will stop seeing combat again.). The new ship looked like the Phoenix, the mystical bird shaped ship shone. It was outfitted with new armor, plasma shields. Since the ship was more wider than the old one it had several advantages: New Guunka Units to make the ship three times faster, Quad TurboPlasma Cannons located at the sides of the ship which can rotate to hide them to ambush idiotic enemies, Solaris-Class Plasma Cannons on the belly of the ship which were 5 spheres with three long cannons. The cannon must rotate so that the next barrel can fire its devastaing beam of plasma. On the wings of the majestic ship were Alpha-Class Plasma Turbo Cannons that could rotate 360 Degrees.
The Nightfires aboard the new Emperor Phoenix were outfitted with the best technology and new design. They kept the body of the Harrier Jet Fighter but had new things. It had tri-foils, which means three wings on the left and right side of the ship. The first and last wings were short, while the wings in the middle were the ones with the guns. The guns were two Zeus-Class Hyper Plasma Cannon, next ot the cannons was the Nova Bomb Launcher and next to the Bomb Launcher was the Rocket Pods. It looks like a heavy cargo but the ship is lighter since the ship has been counterweighted an outfitted with a G-Diffuser located in the Guunka Unit of the fighter.
The Emperor Phoenix launches and heads to the next destination, the Galactical Core.
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On the next chapter....
Star Nigel is under attack by the Kitkune Armada. Will they be able to survive? Will they advance to the next part of this mission?
Find out next time. --------------------------------------------------------------------
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Mar 17, 2007 21:31:22 GMT
Yahoo... I want read about this attack today... xD
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Post by victor on Mar 18, 2007 4:14:07 GMT
Chapter 7: Kitkune Armada.
The Emperor Phoenix was crusing normally in Sector K45T en route to the Galactical Core. As the advanced farther, the team saw the unexpected. Delightful Sun Crusher (The Mako Shark Ships) debris was floating in space. It was a huge mystery in this area. Some reports of the area blame Space Pirates for the troubles here but Star Nigel is about to find out out why they call this area "Starship Graveyard".
The Emperor Phoenix had its TurboPlasma Cannons hid. Out of the darkness of space, Battleships decloak. These ships were dagger shapped and had delta wings. Armed with Kukaris Photon Cannons both Turbo and Semi located in the hull, wings, belly, and bow of the ship.
"Umm.... I think we got a problem here." Nigel sweated on his Throne in the silver room. Vic, seating on his chair and close to the panel, presses the combat button. The sides of the Emperor Phoenix rotate and reveal the Quad TurboPlasma Cannons and aim at the ships located left and right of its sides. The wing cannons then aim at their directions while the Solaris Cannons aimed.
The Kitkune Captain looks from his ship at the Emperor Phoenix and orders to fire at the enemy and recover the Pheasant Diamond. The Kitkune ships then aim and open fire. The beams impact the ship on contact. The Solaris Cannons then rotate and fire.
BOOOOOOOOOOOM!
BOOOOOOOOOOOM!
BOOOOOOOOOOOM!
The cannons roared as they rotated and fired their plasma beams which were blue collored. The Kitkune Photon beams are colored red. The Solaris Cannons then charge energy, the plasma instead of blue changes to purple. Sparks come out of the barrels.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMM!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!
The purple balls of Electro-Plasma shoot out and impact the Kitkune Ships,causing their systems go nuts and explode internally.
"Nigel!" Abby yelled. "What do we do?"
"Keep moving!" Nigel barked as he pointed his finger at the ships. "We're gonna shpw them that this Galaxy is for everone and they have no right to call it ther Empire."
The Emperor Phoenix then moves foward while firing its weapons. Photon beams were impacting the ship and breaching some of the armor. Then the wing cannons rotate and open fire, seding rapid plasma beams at the Kitkune Ships. The beams impact the bridge that they went down exploding and breaking into bits. The Emperor Phoenix then jumps into HyperSpace, leaving 12 Kitkune Battleships.
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Mar 18, 2007 10:18:22 GMT
Coolio... xD I love all your Fan Fictions... xD
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Post by victor on Mar 18, 2007 21:48:18 GMT
Chapter 8: The Traitor in the Government.
The Emperor Phoenix then comes out of hyperspace. They arrived at their destination: The Galactical Core. The ship was cruising at normal speed. Out of nowhere, a plasma beam came out of of nowhere and dissapeared soon after. The attacker decloaks. It was a Robin-Class Battleship with guns on the wings, hull, and belly. The ship then blocks their path.
"Isn't that... Fanny!!??" Vic yelled as he saw the ship. The plasma glass that made the ''eyes '' of the ship saw the Odachi, Fanny's ship. The Odachi then aims its guns at the Emperor Phoenix
"Incoming transmission!" Abby yelled. A holographic screen came out of nowhere and floated. Nigel was staring at it and the image appears and it reveals to be Francine Fullbright, she had the rank of Admiral.
"What! Explain this! Why are you attacking an ally?" Nigel demanded. Only one thing meant to him: betrayal.
The Odachi then aims its guns at the Emperor Phoenix and fires. The beams of plasma impact the Nigel's ship, causing the shields to go down. The Solaris Cannons then aim at the ship and open fire. The sphere rotates and the cannon opens fire again and again while the Odachi counterattacked by using its TurboPlasma Cannons. The green plasma beams impact the Emperor Phoenix. There was a fire on the Unit Room and the left wing was damaged and on fire. The green plasma beams kept on firing and hitting.
"Fire! Fire!" Fanny yelled as the cannons fired. "Ha! Nigel you fool, I've always worked for the Kitkunes since this started. Now, I was tasked to destroy you, so prepare to die."
Nigel then closed his eyes. The Solaris Cannons then aimed at theOdachi's bride. The cannons rotate, the plasma generators then charge to full power.
RRRRRRRRRRRRRMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMP
SHUK-SHIK
The plasma generator loaded the liquid plasma into the cannons. The barrel heats up and the liquid plasma is heated along with the Neon Gas in there. Once heated, the plasma left the cannon with a BOOM. The energy beam impacted the bridge and the Odachi went down, the bridge was destroyed and the rest of the ship went down slowly while exploding, bursting in flames as it went to its starry grave.
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Post by victor on Mar 19, 2007 22:05:42 GMT
People, if you have any questions about the Star Nigel Saga, I posted a Q's and A's Thread were I will answer all your doubts about the Saga and its related things. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 9: Planet V-kon of the Delightful Space Pirates.
Space Pirates. Scum of the Galaxy and wanted robbers who plunge star ships for treasure in the rich worlds of the Galaxy. Attacking Trade Organization Star Ships for the values they possesses such as gold, platinum, technology and other things of value. Several star systems have placed immense bounties on the pirates. But worse are what became of the Delightfuls and their fleet:They turned to piracy and plundred ships across the V-kon Star System.The Delightfuls control the Delightful Pirates. Their Jolly Roger flies in every ship of their Pirate Fleet.
The Jolly Roger of the Delighful Pirates: It was blue, there was a red fox and under the vulpine as two crossed sabers.
Now that the Delightfuls control the V-kon Star System and became the most powerful Space Pirates in the Milky Way, Andromeda, Black Eye, and the local Dwarf Galaxies near the Milky Way. They are considered a threat since they control the beatiful paradises of the V-kon Star System, have a huge fleet under their command and have two of the Pheasant Diamonds.
The Emperor Phoenix had landed in V-kon City. V-kon City was much like Venice, Italy. Canals and buildings in the water. Boats are a medium of transportation around the city. Star Nigel was on a yacht, but in reality it was a combat yacht, the guns were hidden around. There was a single plasma gun on the bow of the yacht, one in the poop deck, and three on the sides of the ship. A small flagpole flew the Star Nigel Flag.
The Star Nigel Flag was green and had a dragon and a phoenix with the Galaxy above their heads and their motto. The motto was was under the creatures and read "Fuerza, Valor, y Valentia" which means Strenght, Courage, and Bravery.
The yacht then turns west and heads to City Square...
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Post by victor on Mar 20, 2007 7:51:42 GMT
Chapter 10:V-kon City
As the yacht steered, a Delightful Pirate Gunboat spotted the Star Nigel Yacht which was named Flamedramon. The Gunner then puts his hands on the turret and opens fire, sending green plasma beams at the Flamedramon, the beams then impact the ship casusing some damage to the ship. Nigel then presses a button on the control panel and the turrets came out. Abby ran to the rear turret and took control of it and Vic took control of the turret in the bow. The problem worsened when more gunboats came and open fire. Nigel on the ships wheel steered left and Abby fired purple plasma beams.
(This is a song)
We're going to restart, The Legend is going to be rewritten, At grand speed I know it too well.
Decide your truth, From gold to the Galaxy to your entrails, saving it we all have to and with courage.
Heaven was, Your heart took us there. Inside us there's a sleeping hero.
WAKE IT UP!
Let's fly with decision, To a distant galaxy, It's hard if we fear, take a century and vanish,
May the beats of their hearts guide them on the path, To that day that we all forgot, Lets fight to bring back, In a battle that will staaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrt!
Abby swivels her turret to the right and shoots one of the Delightful Gunboats, damaging it, Nigel then steers to the left while Vic and Abby fire the Pegasus Cannons at the Gunboats. Nigel then sets the yacht at full speed and the Flamedramon goes at full speed, sending water across. The sun shone in the sky like red ball of fire in the heavens. The chase began with plasma beams being rapidly fired from their respective cannons, impacting crew members of the Delightful Pirates. The people then just look at the scene from their apartments. Water being scattered and the sounds of plasma roaring was very common everyday.
"LOOK OUT!" Vic yelled as he saw another yacht in front of them. Nigel then slows down and stops completely. Much to their surprise, it was the Delightful Yacht. The Delightfuls then come to the poop deck pissed off.
"What is that infernal pandemonium!!!??" The Delightfuls yelled as they stared at the Flamedramon. Vic then swivels his the bow turret and aims the Delightfuls.
"Kalimera! Kalimera! Kalimera, Delightful Pirates. Long time no see? How's business going?"
"Very well!" The DC replied with sarcasm. The Blond Boy known as Donald looks at the turret.
Th DC snorted. "A Pegasus-class Cannon? That thing is really weak." They said in a insulting manner.
"This is a Pegasus Mk III Cannon, 3 times faster than the Mk II and I. " Vic stated. "Capable of shooting 5600 Plasma Bolts per minute and is unlimited ammo due to a Pegasus Plasma Generator is integrated into the unit. Also, mind that the cannon is made for quickly mowing the enemy in seconds and is equipped with a 40X Scope for its long range powers,which is something that.."
"STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP!" Nigel yelled from the bridge. "I GET THE DAMN THING! ITS JUST A DAMN CANNON AND THAT'S GOOD ENOUGH FOR ME."
Abby rolled her eyes in annoyence.
"Look, Dorks!" Vic pointed his left index finger at them. "We know you have two Pheasant Diamonds."
"So?" The DC looked at Vic.
"Hand it to us or there will be serious trouble." Vic barked. "The Flamedramon can take any punishment you send."
"Vic, shut up." Nigel commanded.
"But.."
"SHADDUP!" Nigel yelled.
"OK"
"Now, Dorks. We'll make you a deal.. Give us the Diamonds and we'll give you half our pay."
"Hmm..." The DC thought. "All right." They took out the two Diamonds and Vic caught them.
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Mar 20, 2007 15:09:23 GMT
OMG... Sorry I didn't comment your previous Fan Ficks, but I haven't seen them... All Fan Fictions are really great...
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Post by victor on Mar 21, 2007 0:41:44 GMT
Chapter 11: Lambda
The Grand Phoenix was now orbiting V-kon. Nigel, Vic and Abby were on the Meeting Room and thinking of what they should do next. Sitting and thinking in their minds. Doubts arose in their minds until Vic had an idea.
"Lets bring them back! Bring Kuki and Wally back to the team." Vic stated as he took out the cerulean Pheasant Diamond. Nigel and Abby agree to the idea. Vic then closes his eyes.
"Pheasant Diamond. Jewel of power and wisdom.Hear my cry and help me. Where is Wallace Beatles." Vic told the Diamond, which glew and fired a beam of light at a wall. The wall then receives the impact and changes to the image of a galaxy.
"That's the..." Nigel said as he looked at it.
"Yes.. that's it.. the Whirlpool Galaxy." Vic said as he opened his eyes and gave a look at the Galaxy.
"How did Numbuh 4...? I mean... how did he get there?" Abby asked.
"Hmm... he had a fake Diamond and arrived there via Chaos Control. Now, we have to do the same thing all over again." Nigel said.
Vic then grabbed the Diamond as it shone. "CHAOS CONTROL!!"
The Grand Phoenix then dissapeared from V-kon quickly and then appeared in orbit of Planet Ubee, the planet where Wally was.
"How did you?" Abby asked Vic.
"The Diamonds implify the Space-Time Powers of Chaos Control. We flew across the unknown to warp at a Galaxy that most beings thought impossible to reach. The Pheasant Diamonds were created by the angels to maintain a balance in the Universe, in the right hands, the Diamonds could bring peace. In the wrong hands, the Diamonds could be use to fuel weapons of mass destruction. " Vic explained.
The three head to the bridge and seat on their respective seats. Abby turns on the Communicator and establishes a link to Wally's Fighter but static was heard. Abby sighted and Nigel closed his eyes. Vic then uses Chaos Control to warp Nigel, Abby, and himself to the planet.
It was raining on the planet. Wally was on his bedroom on his safehouse, the room was blue with a bookshelf full of books about guns. A desk and a laptop and a bed with tiger pelt blanket.
KNOCK!
KNOCK!
KNOCK!
"Damn it!" Wally cursed. "I'm coming! I'm coming. Stoopid people." Wally cursed as he walked to the front door and opens it. Revealing to be his former teammates.
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Mar 21, 2007 1:06:37 GMT
Awesome! ;D
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Post by victor on Mar 22, 2007 0:03:50 GMT
Chapter 12:Zeta
Wally could not believe his eyes and rubbed them.
"Numbuh 4. Its us." Abby smacked him with the palm of her left hand and then stopped.
"How did you get here?" Wally asked the trio.
"By using Chaos Control." Vic replied back at the Aussie.
"Numbuh 4. We want you to rejoin the team, the Milky Way is in danger and a race of evil vulpines called the Kitkunes are looking for the 12 Pheasant Diamonds. We already have three of them. We have to stop them before they conquer the Milky Way." Nigel explained.
"What? No way!" Wally yelled. "If have a better life here and I get paid buhmillions of Whirlpool Credits every day. Besides, being a bounty hunter is soopuh cool. I get to actually capture bad guys and charge a bounty on their heads."
"Don't you miss us?" Vic said. "What about the adventures we had."
"Forget it."
"What about Numbuh 3?" Vic closed his eyes. "You still like her? And you lover her? You're still in love with her, are you?"
"Alright! Alright!" Wally admitted. "I'm in love with her, and I can't deny it. Guys, I'm coming back to the team."
"All right!" Abby cheered in glee.
"Now, we have to find Numbuh 3." Vic said. "If we can just locate her."
"She's on the Black Eye Galaxy. That's the last I saw of her." Wally said. "She told me she was going to live there from now on."
"Then we better head to the Grand Phoenix." Nigel said.
On the Grand Phoenix..
"CHAOS CONTROL!
The Emperor Phoenix then vanishes from the Whirlpool Galaxy and reappears in the orbit of a back water planet in the Black Eye Galaxy. The planet was blue and red. Planet SW-453 was their first try.
"CHAOS CONTROL!"
''Not again!!!!" Wally yelled as the green light warped the four mercs to the planet.
On the planet surface.....
It was nighttime and Kuki Sanban was surrounded by Pirate Troopers in a dead alley in Kijaboot City. Kuki had a small blaster pistol with only 12 shots left out of the 450 Shots. Kuki's Blaster looked like a Luger Pistol with a short barrel. The Pirate Troops then aim their rifles at her. Kuki closed her eyes.
BANG!
BANG!
BANG!
BANG!
THUD!
THUD!
THUD!
THUD!
THUD!
THUD!
Kuki opened her eyes and saw Nigel, Abby, Wally, and Vic holding Lambda Eagle Pistols.
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Post by victor on Mar 22, 2007 22:05:53 GMT
Chapter 13: Alpha Factor.
"CHAOS CONTROL!" Vic yelled as the light absorbed the Team including Kuki to the Emperor Phoenix. Then Vic performed another Chaos Control and warped the ship back to the Milky Way Galaxy to Sector 0563 in the edge of the Milky Way. There was nothing but blackness in straight ahead.
The team then goes to the Meeting Room and discuss their plans to head to the next world to locate the next Pheasant Diamond. After three hours of discussing the plan, they agree.
The day came, the plan was to assault a tropical planet in the Galactical Edge. The Emperor Phoenix landed on a desert. Only Kuki, Nigel, and Wally were on the hot, scorching sands of the desert and armed with Lambda Eagle Pistols with silencers and a scope.
"Remember," Nigel said. "This is a stealth mission. We have to recover the Diamond and leave."
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Post by victor on Mar 23, 2007 3:56:59 GMT
Chapter 14:Gunboat Chase!
"Look! Gunboats?" Wally asked as he saw a river with three Kitkune Gunboats, theses sea-faring ships had a plasma engine, a double barreled turret that fires Plasma Bullets and armored hull.Nigel opens the hatch, pulls the Kitkune Female out of the boat and shoots her chest several times. He then drops the dead body of the enemy on the sandy ground, with the blood oozing out. Kuki and Wally do the same and board the boat.
"Nigel? Nigel? Can you hear me?" Vic said over the comm of their Starship.
"Yeah. I can hear you!" Nigel said.
"We're now on orbit. You three got trouble, there's an armada of Kitkune Gunboats behind you at full speed." Vic said.
Behind the three stolen gunboats, few Green Plasma Bullets flew from the cannons and miss.
"Guys!" Vic said. "The turrets can spin 360 Degrees. Its on the control panel somewhere. Good luck."
Nigel, Kuki ,and Wally then steered their boats south. The Kitkune Gunboat Armada then opened fire and a rage of plasma bullets flew like crazy. One of the bullets impacted Wally's engine, casusing smoke to come out. Shields were going down little by little as the projectiles impacted.
RAATATATATATAATATATATATATATATATAT!!
PING! PING! PING!
FWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMM!
The three stolen Gunboats then swivle their turrets at the chasing Armada. Two Gunboats catched up to the side of Kuki. The Gunboats then shoots her gunboat quickly.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM!
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Kuki yelled as her Gunboat burst into flames while the Kitkunes kept on shooting Kuki's Gunboat to avoid her leaving the boat.
Wally's Gunboat exploded next.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM!
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"
10 Gunboats surrounded Wally's Gunboat and shoots it. Sending several plasma bullets at the flaming wreck to kill him. Nigel then sees that he is lost and stops his boat. The Kitkune Armada then surrounds him aiming their guns if he attempts to resist.
45 Minutes Later Kitkune Sea Base
Nigel, Kuki, and Wally were now in the Kitkune Base Prision something horrible awaits them.
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Post by victor on Mar 23, 2007 19:31:22 GMT
Chapter 15: Sea Base
Nigel and the others were thrown in a cell were they were going to be tortured. Laws were passes that outlawed torture but some worlds disobey these laws. Nigel has heard of the Kitkunes torture methods. The cell opens and three Kitkunes, a male wearing a green uniform and two females wearing a body glove with their armor on the knees, chest , back, and wielded Plasma Pulse Rifles with unlimited ammo. The rifles had a short stock, long barrel,electronic scope, and a sholder strap. Then a black sphere hovered and entered the cell while the Kitkunes where watching. Nigel started to sweat. Kuki closed her eyes while Wally stared. The droid then passed Nigel and Wally, Kuki, being the weakest member is tortured.
The droid extends its arms and grabs Kuki's right arm, another arm comes out of the spherical body but it had a Bone Smasher. The droid proceeds to smash the bone, which was some what horrible, the screams of pain from Kuki's mouth were being enjoyed by the vulpines.
"You freaks! Let her go!" Wally stood up and runned to the Officer with a fist to unleash his anger.
SMACK!
Wally is pushed to the ground by a smack of a pulse rifle, while the droid tore skin, flesh. Injecting serums of unknown substances. These thing had to be stopped or Kuki will die. Kuki then drops to the ground, weak and trying to breath air. Nigel then took from his pocket a small capsule, he throws it and the smoke clears. Nigel now wielded his Lambda Eagle Pistols and shoots the three vulpines in the head.
"Numbuh 4. Can you carry Numbuh 3 in your back?" Nigel questioned Wally.
"I can." Wally said. "If I can just get something to tie her to my back."
"This will do!" Nigel walked up to the Officers body and removed his belt. Nigel then helped Wally put Kuki on his back and tying her.
"Grab the rifle. Don't let Numbuh 3 get hit, we cannot let her die." Nigel replied as Wally picked up the Lakoo Plasma Pulse Rifle. The Mercs then head to the door in the Prision Complex and left. The alarm sounded, the entire based was being mobilized. Kitkune Troopers were moving to every sector of the base.
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