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Post by allie on Apr 17, 2007 23:13:43 GMT
I've written more! ^_^
The wind blew softly, as petals danced across the late morning dew of the grass. There stood a priest, holding a bible. A little not so far from the priest stood a young man, at the age of twenty-two breathed in and out over and over. He had a bald head, also wearing trademarked sunglasses from his childhood long ago.
“No need to be nervous, Nigel…” he had told himself millions of times.
Nigel Uno’s wedding day had finally come. He wore a smooth, dark tuxedo, with a little white gardenia on the left side. He swiftly rocked back and forth on his shoes, nervously.
Rachel T. McKenzie had never looked more beautiful in her life. And of course to Nigel, he thought she was always beautiful since they were eleven-years-old. Even with that samurai helmet, she had still looked beautiful. She wore the most glorious whitest dress that Nigel had ever seen, as it only had reached to her knees. She was the most beautiful bride ever, walking down the path of the park to her future spouse’s side.
Not Lizzie, not Abby, not anyone but being married to Rachel Tristan McKenzie, the girl of Nigel’s dreams, was finally coming true.
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 23:15:32 GMT
Great work! ;D I like the last line, especialy....
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Post by allie on Apr 17, 2007 23:18:27 GMT
Me too...for some reason. XD
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 23:18:56 GMT
XD It's cuz we're 1/362 shippers, obviously.... XD
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Post by allie on Apr 17, 2007 23:20:22 GMT
There is that. X3
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Post by numbah72 on Apr 17, 2007 23:23:03 GMT
its so beautiful! im gonna cry now
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 23:25:48 GMT
Tee hee. ;D
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Post by allie on Apr 17, 2007 23:28:26 GMT
Aww, thanks Numbuh 72! <3
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Post by wallynkukiness on Apr 17, 2007 23:29:03 GMT
That's soo sweet Allie! Is there gonna be more?
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Post by numbah72 on Apr 17, 2007 23:29:34 GMT
yer welcome! i cant believe you people started a new thread without me! *tear*..ok im over it ;D
so whats up?
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 23:30:35 GMT
Nothing much. New topic time once again, I guess...
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Post by numbah72 on Apr 17, 2007 23:33:58 GMT
okay!So whats the topic?
BTW i just signed up on the 1/362 forum!
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 23:35:53 GMT
*smiles* Good for you, but it isn't very active, sadly.....
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Post by numbah72 on Apr 17, 2007 23:36:59 GMT
yeah i noticed that...Maybe all it needs is some old-fashioned pie-loving goodness xD
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Post by hypergirl20 on Apr 17, 2007 23:37:00 GMT
New thread....already??? You people are scary....but that's why you guys are awesome
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