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Post by ~PrettyInPurpleness~ on Nov 26, 2007 11:53:39 GMT
Yeah, sure you can, Numbuh 734. Just remember to use proper grammar and spell check, capitalize the right words, and try to make the characters IN CHARACTER. Also don't use any smileys for this fic. In my humble opinion, I think it looks stupid to do so. Anyway, moving on!
Scene: Balcony perched over the rose garden
Kuki: *Breaks away from the kiss* Miguel, what are you doing? *Hears footsteps and turns to see Numbuh Four looking shocked, then angry, then heartbroken* Wally, wait! *Numbuh Four turns and leaves* Come back! *Runs after him*
Wally: *goes outside to the backyard*
Kuki: *finds him there a few minutes afterward* I don't understand! What's wrong?
Wally: Everything! Just leave me alone!
Kuki: Why do you have such a problem with-
Wally: *suppressed sob* JUST GO AWAY! *Numbuh Three doesn't move* Please, Kuki.
Kuki: *more serious than she's ever been* I'm not going anywhere until I know you're okay.
Wally: I AM okay *tries to hide his tears by pretending to tie his shoelaces*
Kuki: No, you're not, and I wanna know why.
Wally: I saw you kiss him.
Kuki: He kissed me. I didn't even expect it until it happened. And then I didn't know what to do, so I just let him. But you still haven't answered my question. Why does it bother you?
Wally: *Takes a deep intake of breathe* Kuki, the truth is.......
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Post by ben10 on Nov 26, 2007 22:13:43 GMT
EEEEEEEEPPPPP! Thats sooooooo cute! Plezzzzz countinue!!!!!!!
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Post by thetoughgirl on Nov 27, 2007 4:46:42 GMT
AWWWWW! I LOVE IT!!!!
hmmm...idk maybee you should keep doing cause i spell alot of things wrong and some i just do it to be fun. my grammer is wired!lol!But i could hmmm...people should always keep there charecter in charecter. =]
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Post by camper on Nov 27, 2007 8:18:19 GMT
Indeed it is, let's see what's next.  |
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Post by C7Angelocas12 on Nov 28, 2007 4:44:20 GMT
Mind if this Courting Commander, Yelling Trooper, and Panda Warrior took a whack at this progressing fanfiction?
Scene: Nigel, Rachel, Patton, and Fanny walking into main reception room
Nigel: Impressive party Miguel's hosting, don't you think, Rachel?
Rachel: That's right, Nigel. Definitely a break from what we've been seeing. *turns to face Hoagie and Abby, with Nigel following* Oh, hey there, Hoagie and Abby. Have either of you seen Wally or Kuki anywhere?
Hoagie: Uh... Miguel was kinda making some moves on Kuki on the dance floor...
Abby: Yeah. You guys shoulda seen how sulky Wally was while Miguel and Kuki were doin' the tango. Why that boy just doesn't tell the girl his feelings for her already is waaaay beyond Numbuh Five.
Patton: *eyeing Hoagie and Abby skeptically* Huh? But didn't Numbuhs Four and Three already admit their feelings for each other in that play several weeks a-- *socked in the head by Fanny* AGH!!! What did ya do that for!?!?
Fanny: Wrong fanfiction, ye dolt!! This isn't that fanfiction timeline that's supposed to end with a final apocalyptic showdown between us and that President of Iran, er, new World's Most Ultimate Evil!!!!!
Hoagie and Abby: *staring at Nigel, Rachel, Patton, and Fanny in total confusion*
Hoagie, a bit hesitantly: "Fanfiction timeline?" "New World's Most Ultimate Evil?"
Abby: Numbuh Five is officially lost, especially with those parts about the "final apocalyptic showdown between us and that President of Iran" and "that play."
Nigel and Rachel: *looking grimly yet nervously at each other before turning back to face Hoagie and Abby*
Nigel: Um... it's a long story, and that I'm afraid will probably be a total understatement.
Rachel: *clears her throat* Right. *leans toward Patton and Fanny, whispering* Ix-nay on the owdown-shay... for now. *straightens back up after acknowledging nods by Patton and Fanny* Well, we might want to find Wally, Kuki, and Miguel before this party really gets out of control.
Nigel: Indeed. Hoagie and Abby, you stay here in case at least one of them shows up.
Hoagie and Abby: Will do, boss!
Rachel: Meanwhile, Patton and Fanny, you two can check the rose garden.
Patton and Fanny: *saluting before running off*
Nigel: Which leaves you and me to check the backyard, Rachel. Shall we?
Rachel: You got it, Nigel. Right now, a fight between Wally and Miguel is the last thing I'd like to see before this party ends...
Nigel and Rachel: *heading down a different hallway*
Hoagie: *scratching his head* Wow. What do you think those four meant by whatever they were talking about, Abby?
Abby: *shakes her head negatively* Probably something goin' on that convinced Kids Next Door Global Command that the President of Iran is more evil than Grandfather. Ah, well. You heard 'em, Hoagie. Let's just stay here and wait.
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Post by ~PrettyInPurpleness~ on Nov 29, 2007 0:00:01 GMT
Hahaha nice to see somebody helping me with this fic! Anyway, onto the next scene!
Scene: Backyard, Numbuhs 3 and 4 on the bench
Wally: ...Kuki, I-
Miguel: Kuki? Where are you? *sees Kuki, Wally scowls* Oh there you are, senorita. I was missing you! *Takes Numbuh Three by the arm* Let's go.
Kuki: *Pulls away* Wait a minute, I need to talk with Numbuh Four!
Wally: Just forget it.
Kuki: But Numbuh Four-
Wally: *suddenly yells* I LIKE YOU, OK? MORE THAN A FRIEND, ALRIGHT? I THINK ABOUT YOU LIKE A CRUDDY LOSER! But I bet you never knew, did you? You were off busy flirting with HIM, and you never-*whispers* you never knew.
Kuki: Wally, I-
Wally: Whatever, I know you don't....I mean....Look Kuki, it's ok if you don't ever wanna see me again, 'cause you've got him *points at a very shocked Miguel* and....well....just forget the whole thing *walks away, Numbuhs 60 and 86 show up*
Fanny: There you are! We've been looking for you everywhere, Numbuh Three! Where on earth is Numbuh Four, and what on earth is going on with you two?!
Kuki: I....I....I don't know *looks hopelessly where Wally left*
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So there you go. Of course it's not finished, but I wanted to know what you guys thinks so far! I tried to make the characters in character as possible (I think that when Wally does confess, he's gonna yell it out or something, whatever the circumstance) but I might have made Kuki a little too serious. Oh well. I want reviews! C'mon, it's not that hard! If you read this story, then I demand that you review *pulls out gumball shooter* ALSO I need other people to contribute! I can't write this alone! *looks significantly at Lil' Miss Kuki Cat*
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Post by Dreamer on Nov 29, 2007 11:33:47 GMT
Awwwwww..... *doesn't want to ruin it by continuing, has like zero inspiration when it comes to 3/4*
... I'm serious. Kuki/Wally is almost impossible for me to write, for some reason.
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Post by Numbuh 58 (Fredos) on Nov 29, 2007 15:17:27 GMT
Great fic! I'm going to visit this Forum oftener. I haven't got time now, sowwy... And we should start new 3/4 Thread I think xD
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Post by camper on Nov 29, 2007 15:27:15 GMT
Well, let's do the honors.  |
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