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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 18:30:38 GMT
*hugs you* YAY! Thank you, V!  |
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 18:32:46 GMT
*hugs back* No problem! ;D Today I thought about a lot of more CC moments I could put in the story. ^^
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 18:35:58 GMT
*is supuh excited* |
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 18:38:19 GMT
I think I'm about at the half of the second chapter. ^^ But I can give ya a preview if you want. =]
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 18:45:16 GMT
You know....jsut wait. Keep working, and I'm going to wait. As I've seen from previous expereinces, to much of a sneak peek can ruin it. How about...you just give out like...a line.... ;D If that's okay, that is...
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 18:47:04 GMT
Okay then. ;D Here goes:
"When she didn’t seem to react to his question, nor stop to shake her head in the first place, he slowly held out his hands and softly placed them upon her shoulders."
Well... Quite a long line, but what the heck. ^^;
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 18:50:47 GMT
Dawww, that sounds so sweet! <3 I cant wait to read it in it's intierty.
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 18:51:25 GMT
I'm glad you think so.  |
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 18:55:05 GMT
;D Of corse I think so. LOL. |
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 19:11:19 GMT
I'm almost done now. ;D
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 19:14:58 GMT
w00t! . |
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 19:22:30 GMT
Here you go! Enjoy! ;D
Have Faith in Me - Chapter 2
Rachel, again feeling blush cross her face, realized she was lost in his eyes for the second time. They were deep, dark, mysterious… even though the twinkles made his pupils light up. She forced the words he’d just spoken to repeat inside her mind. These words were meant for her, only her. And for some reason… they meant something special to her.
The look on Nigel’s face hadn’t changed a bit. His eyes still serious, yet his smile still comforting, and welcoming. He returned her glance the same way, almost staring. What she didn’t know was that he was lost in her eyes as well. He felt too focussed on her charming look to even notice it rather looked surprised.
Silence followed, silence endured. After Nigel had explained why he had found what he was looking for, using three simple words, neither of them said a thing. They were lost in each other’s eyes, looking for a way out, and too concentrated to actually notice one another.
Until Rachel did manage to snap out of her trance; because Nigel blinked. For one little moment, he prevented her from entering his look, his eyes, his mind. His deep mind she longed to explore some more, by just exchanging looks.
She was now staring at him as she realized what they had been doing for an entire minute. She knew she was now blushing even more, and started to wonder why Nigel didn’t mention it. Even if he wasn’t that good at notice, anyone could’ve seen her red cheeks by now. He’s ignoring my blushing… but why? After all, I’m blushing because of him.
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Blushing because of him?!
Rachel was no longer looking into Nigel’s eyes, because she felt so confused and shocked at the same time she madly started to shake her head. She felt confused because of what they had just been going through; she felt shocked because she now realized the only reason she was blushing… had to be him.
Nigel looked at her in surprise. “Rachel, what is it?” he asked, raising an eyebrow. When she didn’t seem to react to his question, nor stop to shake her head in the first place, he slowly held out his hands and softly placed them upon her shoulders.
It worked: his sudden touch made her calm down, and she slowly ceased to shake her head from left to right. She made herself look in his direction again, and wanted to say something. She wished she could say something; anything. First she still had a chance to speak without embarrassing herself, but now… now she had been acting like a complete fool.
“I’m…” She got hold of her sleeve and started to tuck it to and fro nervously, looking at the floor. “Nigel, I’m sorry…”
Nigel lowered his eyebrow to its original spot, almost right above his eye. It was nearly touching it, but still visible above his sunglasses. “Why are you sorry?”
“Because… because I acted like an idiot. You must be thinking that--”
His grip on her shoulder tightened to silence her. Nigel was smiling again.
“I’m not thinking anything. Except… are you sure you’re feeling well? You wouldn’t go and shake your head like that for nothing. Is it a headache?”
Mr Mindreader was right again. It wasn’t exactly a headache, but this confusion did make her brain twist so much it started to cause pain.
Yet, before she even noticed herself, Rachel had nodded her head, still interested by the floor underneath their feet. Great; now she had made him believe that something was really wrong with her.
She started to regret that when she felt how his hands slowly left her shoulders, sliding down her arms. When they had reached her wrists, they pulled back, without touching her hands.
“I’ll get you an aspirin, okay?”
Without waiting for an answer to his rhetorical question Nigel already turned away from her, to walk over to the door, and leave the room. And leave her.
That’s why Rachel quickly reflexed and managed to embrace his wrist with her hand. “Wait. I’m going with you.”
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 19:30:57 GMT
Ooooo, this is geting good! I cant wait for your next update! Eeek, so excited! Wee! XD |
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Post by number9 on Apr 17, 2007 19:34:27 GMT
Thank you!! ;D ;D
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Post by lillyfan123 on Apr 17, 2007 19:35:15 GMT
Oh, your welcome. You should post it on fanfiction.com. |
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