1/362 Courting Commanders VII

[wallynkukiness]

Oh dude, new thread already? Man I'm gonna be behind, darn school -_-; Anyone care to fill me in on what happened?

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@allies fanfic 1 page ago
Great! Lizzie's mean in this fic....*sniff* poor Rach.

Chad/Mushi? Wow, never heard of that couple. Have they even met before? I don't really remember

[allie]

Hi Jojo! ^_^ *glomps* Curse you darn school!...even I'm on Spring Break until Tuesday. XD;;

Yeah, Lizzie's gonna be sorta mean in the fic...hehe. ^^;;

[wallynkukiness]

*glomps back* ^^ Pssh I wish I had Spring Break again but mine was like 2 weeks ago, I was suppose to have tomorrow off for Easter but because of the snow say I have to go to school.

@fanfic
'Tis still good though ;D

[allie]

That just stinks! >.<;;

@fanfic
Heh, thank you! ^^

[husk]

Nice fic Allie. I started one just like it lol. Lizzie was mean, poor Rachel.

[allie]

I know...but I'm finally finished with it! Phew! ^_^ But I um, don't have a title for it..so...oh well, here it is.



I love him. But I can’t. He’s getting married to Lizzie today, so why can’t I stop loving him if he won’t love me back?

I looked at myself in the mirror, wearing a light colored aqua dress. I felt that I was going to break out into tears any second now…but I didn’t. I had be strong. If he ever saw me crying once…I swear he’ll never look at me the same way again.

“RACHEL! Hurry up and tie this bow around my waist, would you?” Lizzie’s voiced hissed into my thoughts. I shook my head, getting the thoughts of my secret love out of my mind. How in the world would her voice be so loud that it could eventually get into my dressing room?

“Coming,” I answered, walking into the hallway where the “Bride’s room” was.

As I entered the room, Lizzie was there, tapping her foot against the cold floor of wood. She was in her wedding dress, her mascara giving darkness to her eyelashes, and that red lipstick. I had to admit it, but she did do a decent job of doing it all herself.

“Well…? Are you just going to stand there or tie the bow, tramp!?” Whatever Lizzie would say to me, any nasty comment or anything, she will never break my spirit. And I mean Never. Sighing, I walked over to the back of her and tied her bow of her sash.

“Not so tight!” she hissed. I lightly gulped, looking up at her face…which was in mine.

“I-I didn’t mean to, honest.” I stammered. Look at me, the great Rachel T. McKenzie, was the greatest supreme leader of the entire Kids Next Door Organization ever in a billion years, now a scared little puppy of big bad Elizabeth Divine at age twenty-two.

What had happened to me? I used to be a tough, brave and fearless leader when I was a kid…I lost everything, especially Nigel.

Lizzie moved in, narrowing her eyes behind her glasses at me. “Get out of my face. Now.” she said coldly. I gulped again, nodding my head. I quickly left the room, closing Lizzie’s door. I walked down the hall way to mine until- I bumped right into Nigel…

“Oh, uh, Rachel! Hello, glad you could make it,” he said, shaking my hand. His sweet British accent has gotten deeper. And in yet…he had still had that bald head of his. I felt extremely mortified not saying anything. So, I just nodded my head, saying, “Oh, yeah. It’s nice to see you too Nigel.”

My secret love raised an eyebrow at me. “You feeling alright? You look a little…well, pale. Would you like me to get you a bottle of water to cool you down?” he offered. I shook my head. “N-no, I’m fine, Nigel. Really, I am. But thanks anyway. I’ll see you soon,” I soon rushed back to my bridesmaid dressing room, closing the door behind me.

…And I sat there on the floor, my back against the wall, next to the door. I couldn’t take it, my heart couldn’t take it. It was crying out, the inside of me, everything, telling me to follow my heart. But I couldn’t, he loved someone else. I started the last thing that I ever wanted to do…I wept.

All of a sudden, I heard tapping at the door.

Tap, tap!

“Rachel? Are you in there Rachel?” a sweet, deep British accent called behind the door.

I knew that voice from anywhere. It was Nigel Uno. I buried my face away in my dress so he wouldn’t see me crying.

“Rachel…?” I heard him open the door, hearing him step into the room. And then…I felt his arms around me, holding me in his arms. My heart felt beating out of my chest. Why is he doing this to me? Why doesn’t he just leave me alone and go to Lizzie?

I shuddered, looking up at him. His eyes were hidden behind those dark sunglasses of his. God those beautiful eyes of his… And then, he hugged me. I gasped. I tried shaking him off of me, but it was no use…No use.

“Why…why are you hugging me? You should be hugging your soon-to-be-wife, Nigel…” I whispered. It hurt for me to say that. My heart was aching on the inside, badly.

He then put a finger to my lips. “Shush, don’t say another word.” he told me softly. I blushed light pink as I felt his finger on my lips. He hugged me again, this time…tightly. “You mean everything to me,” Nigel whispered in my ear. My eyes went wide.

“But…what about Lizzie-” I didn’t finish, he did the exact same thing again, his finger pressed upon my lips once more.

“Forget about her, forget about everything now, Rachel. It’s just you and me, no one else…” he whispered to me. I didn’t understand, he was supposed to marry Lizzie!

I shook my head. “No, no Nigel! I can’t love you! You love Lizzie! And you’re getting married to her today!…I, oh, I just don’t understand…” Nigel touched my chin, making me look up at him.

“Rachel…” Nigel leaned forward, closing in to kiss me. A dark blush went across my cheeks.

I suddenly heard a gasp. “NIGEL UNO!” All of a sudden, I gasped. I looked around and saw the last person that I ever wanted to see…Lizzie Divine.

“Lizzie, I-I can explain!” I stammered. She stomped over, and pulled me by the straps of my dress.

“DON’T YOU EVER, EVER LAY YOUR FILTHY, TRAMPY LIPS ON MY HUSBAND!” she yelled with a loud temper.

“But…I didn’t, it was all-”

“A misunderstanding, Lizzie,” I heard Nigel said calmly. “It was my fault for almost kissing her. I wanted to.”

“…What?!? How dare you! On our wedding day!” Lizzie screeched. She looked back at me, her teeth were gritting. “You…” she gave me a cold look, before setting me on the floor.

“And Lizzie,” Nigel continued. “I’m not your husband, I was going to be, but now I’ve decided…That I’ve now realized that I don’t love you as much as I thought I did anymore. I’m sorry. I hope you can forgive me.”

With a cold hard stare, I watched in horror as Lizzie slapped him across the face, now storming out of the room. We both heard her Bride’s Room door slam shut.

Nigel looked at me, kneeling down. “Are you alright?” he asked me in a calm, caring voice. I blushed deep red, as he stared at my loose dress strap. I turned away, blushing madly. “I…I think so..” I replied.

“Are you alright?” I asked, turning back tom him, trying to hide my loose strap by covering it with my hand.

He nodded. “Yeah, thanks for asking. So…” He rubbed the back of his bald head with his hand. “You must really think that I’m a jerk now, huh?” I shook my head. “No. I thought it was brave of you to stand up to her like that. It was very noble of you.”

Nigel smiled at me, helping me stand up. “Rachel…do you…ever think of…well, getting married some day?”

“What do you mean?”

He took my hands in his, and kneeled down on one knee. “Well…I was just wondering…Will you marry me?” I gasped. “I…I don’t know what to say Nigel…” I confessed.

“Just say yes,” he said, smiling. I blushed rose red. I did love him after all…and I did want to marry him…
“I…I do. I will marry you, Nigel Uno I will!”

Nigel stood up, as I dived straight into his arms, hugging the life out of him. He lightly chuckled, hugging me back. We smiled at each other.

“Nigel?”

“Yeah?”

“I love you,”

“I love you too, Rachel soon-to-be Uno.”

I lightly giggled, snuggling into his tux. But just then, I felt his hand under my chin, as he lifted my head up to face him. He studied my face, smiling mischievously. He leaned over slowly, and kissed my lips. I couldn’t hold it back any longer, I finally listened to my heart. I kissed him back, full with passion, never letting go…ever.

[husk]

awwww (tears) dude. I loved the last line or um close to last line. The entire thing as a whole flowed so nicley. Yay my shipper heart is happy now ^_^

[allie]

Huzzah! ^_^ Glad you loved it. X3 I have a title know, I thank the All-American Rejects for it.

It Ends Tonight, w00t! <3

[husk]

dude, that song rocks. Hey do u mind if i continue on with my wedding fic? its mutated into a multi-chappie.

[lillyfan123]

Mine to. <3 That was awesome, Al. I loved the ending.

[wallynkukiness]

Beautiful Allie, beautiful and fluffy *sigh* I love it! <3 I feel bad for Lizzie though, *huggles poor Lizzie* But I'm happy Nigel and Rach got together *glomps them* ^^

[allie]

Aww, thanks everyone! *huggles* OF COURSE YOU CAN CONINTUE IT, HUSK. I WOULD LOVE YOU TOO. XDDDDD

Aww, yeah, I feel sorry for Lizzie too...but maybe she'll end up with Herbie in the end! You never know what's gonna happen on KND! ^^

[husk]

I actually think that would be good. You know, in my mind, even throughout the marriage fiasco, Rachel and Lizzie can end up friends. They are both strong people, it's just Lizzie wasn't right for Nigel (in the fic world anywayz) and eventually she understands taht.

[allie]

Yay! ^_^ Very strong indeed. But in my mind Lizzie isn't right for Nigel...heh. She's just sorta bossy around him, that's the reason why I don't want her to be with him.

Hmm...I hope your wedding fic well be very fluffy, Husk! Fluff ish good for the soul! ^^ *nods*

[husk]

oh its totally fluffy. FIlled with wonderful flashbacks ^_^ and a kiss in the rain.