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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 25, 2007 6:22:04 GMT
Yeah, that's probably it.
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 16:03:56 GMT
Hm. Looks like I didn't miss much while I was sleeping. (...okay, watching TV, THEN sleeping)
In the meantime, I've already planned a part later on in Chapter Seven for Heiny to get kinda jealous ;D
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Post by thesuki on Feb 25, 2007 16:41:51 GMT
Dont' speak of it! WRITE it! *whipcrack*
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 17:29:24 GMT
Eep! Okay, okay, I'll write it, I'll write it!
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Post by thesuki on Feb 25, 2007 17:30:02 GMT
Good girl. ^^
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 18:38:04 GMT
THERE! It's written! Ch. 7 will be up for proofreading shortly.
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 18:42:23 GMT
Sorry for the double-post, but this needed its own post... www.freewebs.com/numbuh138/5h7.htmKeep in mind, quite a few things brought up in this chapter will come into play later on.  |
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Post by thesuki on Feb 25, 2007 19:42:47 GMT
See what a little whip threat will do? ^^
"Almost too close" is redundant. Just make it "too close".
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 19:59:46 GMT
Oh, duh XD
I'll fix it.
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 25, 2007 21:11:00 GMT
I liked it! Great job as always, artgirl! Hehee..I love jealous Heinrich. ^_^
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 21:17:24 GMT
Thanks ^^
Now...how am I gonna pull off Chapter Eight...
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 25, 2007 21:33:38 GMT
Umm..splendidly? (I know that's not what you're asking...I just constantly make stupid comments. Feel free to ignore me)
Out of curiousity, when did you first get this idea?
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 25, 2007 21:42:37 GMT
When I first created Carmelite ^^ I wanted to, y'know, actually find a use for her, and the story idea evolved from there.
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 25, 2007 22:11:46 GMT
Very cool. ^_^ Carmelite's a great character, especially for an original character.
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 26, 2007 2:51:54 GMT
Yeah, but I don't want to make her TOO Mary-Sue-ish, so I'm worried about how much screen-time (still not the right word, is it?) I'm giving her...
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