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Post by digigirl02 on Feb 18, 2007 19:50:34 GMT
That's cool, I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 18, 2007 19:59:19 GMT
Yay! Looking forward to it. ^_^
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Post by thesuki on Feb 18, 2007 20:58:27 GMT
Getting passed the hard part is always the hardest part (feel free to say "DUH"). Now you can just zip right along. ^^
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 18, 2007 21:18:36 GMT
...I'll go ahead and fight the urge to say duh. ^_^
Anybody else got something in production for 5/Heinrich?
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 18, 2007 21:18:54 GMT
Well, yeah, but that's not saying this is the easiest chapter to write. I'm STILL worried about not giving Abby and Heinrich more lines that don't end in a question mark, and I'm also worried about how I'm going to segue from one point to another.
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 18, 2007 21:23:02 GMT
Hey, they're confused and don't know what's going on. It's only natural they'd have a lot of questions, especially Heinrich. And you're doing a wonderful job so far. ^_^
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 19, 2007 0:23:14 GMT
At any rate, there's a 90% chance that this will be ready for proofreading tonight ^^
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Post by thesuki on Feb 19, 2007 0:24:25 GMT
Good, good. I need something fanish to read. It may even inspire me to draw something else.
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 19, 2007 0:24:59 GMT
Yay for that 90% chance!
...boo to the 10% of it not being ready.
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 19, 2007 2:33:59 GMT
Chapter Six! www.freewebs.com/numbuh138/5h6.htmI'm still not sure if it turned out as good as the rest of the story. I feel like I'm bringing up too many questions and not enough answers  |
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 19, 2007 2:38:51 GMT
It's really good!
I see only one problem - you have a tendency to make me want even more of the story...(not really a problem...more of a gaah..I want to know!)...You really are doing such an amazing job with this story, artgirl! Youre awesome! ^_^
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Post by thesuki on Feb 19, 2007 2:51:17 GMT
Hee... Heiny, your jealous is showing.
Gee.. I hope they hid all the family photos.
All in all, I think you're doing a good job. A little more length would be nice, if only to get a few of those many questions answered, but I like where this is going. Big war with the adults, time travel, big secret, missing parents... Did Heinrich get Abby out of jail? If so where are they now? How will this change the past so the WHITE HOUSE future won't happen? Who invented liquid soap and why?
Aw... now I gotta wait a week for the NEXT chapter. *sulk*
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 19, 2007 2:56:43 GMT
XD Have you ever tricked anyone with the "your epidermis is showing" prank?
And cheer up. I'm gonna try and make the next installment good, so it'll be worth the wait.
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Post by destinyinevitable on Feb 19, 2007 3:22:18 GMT
Oh, they're all worth the wait. We just don't have much patience. I mean, c'mon..look how long we've got to wait for CARAMEL!
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Post by artgirlb [a.k.a. Numbuh 138] on Feb 19, 2007 3:25:00 GMT
Which is a longer wait than you have to wait for the next chapter in my fic.
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