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Post by nathalie on Jun 10, 2006 7:24:15 GMT
ok guys! Im finally gonna do that story!!!
so um, this first chap is like in clarissa's point of view...
enjoy!
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He Didnt keep his promise
As I stumble through the darkness, that is all I remeber
My father didnt keep his promise
He cursed me, like he did the others
Locking my soul away into the deep corners of my mind
He told me he wouldnt, but he did
five years ago
Im not sure I know the others. I know what they look like, but I dont know who they are
all I know is that they are the children that stand beside me in the outside world, their souls lost like mine
I might have known them once, But I dont remeber
I dont remeber anything of my formr life
I dont even remeber my name
All I know is that I was perfect. beautiful, charming, polite, obediant.....
I hated unperfect children
especially those who called themselves the kids next door
I know that in the outside world, I am still perfect
but in a different way. an artificil way
the others and I are known as the delightful children from down the lane
But I want to be delihtful on my own
Father, why did you bind me with the others?
You didnt keep your promise.
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Post by Hello, I must be going! on Jun 10, 2006 17:16:19 GMT
Yea! Whee! You wrote the first part!!
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So... Clarissa's talking, right?
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Post by nathalie on Jun 10, 2006 17:19:29 GMT
yup. sorat like a poem like in her point of view.....
*working on the next part*
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Post by Hello, I must be going! on Jun 10, 2006 17:25:37 GMT
Oh - i didn't notice that that was a poem XD
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Post by nathalie on Jun 10, 2006 17:29:31 GMT
lol
well the next chap wont be
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Post by victor on Jun 10, 2006 19:16:05 GMT
The hurry up.
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Post by nathalie on Jun 10, 2006 19:33:42 GMT
Im writing it down on paper right now!
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Post by Hello, I must be going! on Jun 10, 2006 20:13:19 GMT
w00t! Can't wait!
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Post by nathalie on Jun 10, 2006 21:57:08 GMT
heres the next chap!!!!
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The light from a thin sliver of a cresent moon, glowing partticulary yellow that night, shone down on the large, ornate mansion below, where 5 children stoof i n the garden. The stoof straight, and were dressed neatly, the boys in navy blue suits and the girls in white and bluw sailor dresses. all five pairs of eyes were same same icy blue, and blank and emotionless. The light of the moon seemed to shine on one girl in particular.
She was a rather beautiful girl, long silky blonde hair that fell down to her waist, with a pink hair bow tied into it. She was fairskinned and slender with a bit of development in the chest area, and a a thin sharp face with a small button nose. However, her eyes were the same as the other fours.
They, were delightful children from down the lane, the kids next door's archenemies.
Suddenly they heard a crash from inside the mansion
they turned around., "So... one of their agents have managed to find a way into our home...." they said, their 5 voices ringing out at the exact same time "Well, not if we have anything to say about it"! they walked inside
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Post by Hello, I must be going! on Jun 11, 2006 12:16:26 GMT
YAY!!!
I love it! Aspecially the beginning! Keep up the good work!
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Post by nathalie on Jun 11, 2006 20:14:45 GMT
next part!
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Numbuhh 1534 was digging aroun through the delightful's stuff
"ooh.... interesting!"
"And just what do you think YOURE doing?" he heard the dleighfuls behind him
"well wel... if isnt you kids form that horror movie..." he said calmly
"We are NOT from a horror movie!!!"
he shrugged "whatever. anywayds, I gotta go now... its been fun messin around your stuff!!"
he started to walk out , then paused by the dc, where he flipped up the skirt of the blonde girl, revealing slim pink panties
"Nice panties, cutie!" he said winking at her, then went through a door that said "absolutly no children allowed, even you delightful children"
The delightful children hesitated. they knew they were forbidden to go in there, as that was where father kept highly dangerous chemicals
Now, there is something unknown about the delightful children. On some rare occasions, one of them might have enough urge for something to move all of them. For example, the rainbow monkey incident was mostly cuased by the chubby girl, and the homework incident was pretty much the tall boy's fault.
and when numbuh 1534 hit on the blond girl, something depp within her started to snap
she frowned and stormed into the room, taking the rest of the delightfuls with her.
numbuh 1534 looked up at them, not looking too surprised
"well, Im glad you came back! Cant kepp your hands off me, canya toots?"
"DPNT YOU DARE CALL ME THAT YOU DISGUSTING CREEP!!!"
"so you dont like me.... oh well, too bad for you" he whipped out his weapon and sent a blast at the girl, knocking her into one of the vats of chemicals, drenchingher
the dc gasped and turned to 1534
"See you, freaks!" he lughed and jempted out the window
the dc ran to the girl "ARE YOU ALL RIGHT?!" they stopped and gasped in horror when they saw her
She had grown thick blonde fur, her ears were pointed and caninish, and a thick bushy tail vcurled out from beneath her dress
she groaned and looked up at them "Whats wrong?"
"Y-Youve become a fox!!!"
"What?" she looked down at her hands, which were now paws, and gasped in horror
"Wed better tell father about this...." the dc siad nervously
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Post by Hello, I must be going! on Jun 12, 2006 10:45:08 GMT
I like the pink undies part! XD
I really enjoyed reading this chaper! Can't wait to see what'll happen next!
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Post by victor on Jun 13, 2006 2:31:12 GMT
Cool
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Post by nathalie on Jun 13, 2006 5:59:40 GMT
The Delightfuls stoof in their father's office, looking up at him nervously
"Um.... Father, we, uh, had a little problem..."
"what is it" he said sternly
"Um, we had a knd operative infiltrate the mansion...."
"And did you let him escape?" he growled
"Y-yes....."
he noticed the blond girl hiding behnd the tall boy "What are you doing back there? get out!"
she hesisteaed and came out, showing him her new form
he was quiet for a long moment "How did this happen"
"...we chased him into the chemical storage and.. there was a little accident..."
"the chemical storage?! You were not to go in there!!!"
"W-were sorry we just_"
"Just go to your rooms! Except for you.... we need to talk" he said, glaring at the girl
the other dc glanced at her nervously, then left. the girl looked sadly down at thfloor
"You were the ones who lead them in there,, werent you"
"Yes Father..." she whispered
"why"
"t-that boy... he HIT on me... it made me so..so..."
"oh thats no excuse! You went ahead and dissobeyed, and now look what happened to you!!"
"Im sorry...."
"Just go to your room! and from now on, you are to stay inside!!! I dont want anybody seeing you like this!" he said with a hint of disgust in his voice
she gave a small nod and left
her mind was starting to open
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Post by 28 on Jun 14, 2006 2:12:47 GMT
GASP!
OMG THIS STORY WOCKS!
MOREMOREMOREMORMEROMEORMEOEEEERREE!
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