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Post by makuta on Jun 2, 2005 2:55:40 GMT
_______ I didn't make an acronym for this. Enjoy!______
"Decommissionin'! Decommissionin'!", sang Numbuh 86 while she dragged her teenage victim by foot to the Decommissioning Center.
"No, please! I'll do anything! ANYTHING!!!” begged Numbuh 1182.
"Anything?".
"Yes, anything!".
Fanny stopped and pretended to think. Then, she smiled and widened her eyes. "Will you let me decommission you on camera so I can watch it over and over again?!”, she smirked.
The teenager whined and clawed at the ground with his fingernails.
He whimpered and screamed, “You said that bad word again!”
“What?” said the Irish girl cheerfully, “Decommissionin’?” Teen boy hollered for mercy at the top of his lungs. Numbuh 86 stopped for a moment when a fellow female KND operative crossed her path. It was Numbuh 362.
“Oh, hello Numbuh 362!”Fanny said with a sweet smile. The other girl smiled back at her and stared at her burden. 86 followed her glance and looked at him. With her hand, she patted his head softly and whispered, “Poor thing!”. He whimpered like a dog and searched Numbuh 362’s eyes for some understanding of his fear. Unfortunately, he found none. 362 grinned again and stated, “You sure have a way with teenagers!”.
“I sure do.”, lied Numbuh 86. Now, Numbuh 1182 was using Morse Code to communicate to 362. The blonde numbuh simply laughed.
“You even taught him to play the drums!”. Fanny nodded and continued her journey the teenager’s awful fate.
“No! Don’t listen to her!”, her victim howled, “She’s a bad person!”. Numbuh 362 ignored his cry for help.
_____________I'll post more, later. ;)_________
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Post by delightfulologist1 on Jun 2, 2005 3:26:25 GMT
Great so far!
That's the third Operation: DOOM in a row!
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Post by makuta on Jun 2, 2005 3:31:22 GMT
Ooops! It is? Sorry, I didn't know that. ^_^' Oh well, thanks!
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Post by fluffturf373 on Jun 2, 2005 7:04:26 GMT
Whee! Makuta! That is so great! Hmm, when I first saw the title, I thought you read the RP and copied it down in a fic...
The paragraphs need a little fixin', though. Is Numbuh 1182 a random character or your OC?
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Post by makuta on Jun 4, 2005 22:44:35 GMT
He's just random. (nice numbuh, isn't it?  ) Fixing? Well, at least it's readable! ^_^' |
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Post by delightfulologist1 on Jun 5, 2005 1:40:10 GMT
The paragraphs need a little fixin', though. I don't even see why her paragraphs need fixing. |
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Post by Shwoo on Jun 6, 2005 3:29:06 GMT
They do. Stories are very difficult to read when they're all bunched up like that. It's better to start a new line whenever someone speaks.
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Post by fluffturf373 on Jun 6, 2005 4:35:00 GMT
Agreed. It's confusing when it's all...jumbled up.  |
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Post by makuta on Jun 10, 2005 21:22:58 GMT
Numbuh 86 smiled evilly at the teenager. "You've been through alot, lately," she said, "so I'm going to give you a break." He didn't believe her. Fanny put him in a chair and tied him down. Ropes? Some break that was. A television screen was lowered down to his eye-level. "Do you want to watch some tv.?", she asked him sweetly. Numbuh 1182 didn't reply. Fanny then inserted a tape into the VCR, and a familiar purple dinosaur danced on the screen. He was right to not believe her. This was torture!!! While teen boy struggled to escape, Numbuh 86 popped some popcorn to eat while she watched her victim suffer.
Meanwhile, down on Earth....
Father was dreaming up a scheme to get into the KND moonbase. If he could accomplish this, he would have access to unlimited KND knowledge. Santa Claus? No, that plan would never work. Pizza delivery? Nope. What about....CRASH!!! Father jumped out of his chair. A baseball hit his toe, and he noticed a giant hole in a window. "You stupid kids are going to pay for this!", the devilish dad screamed. "You're going to pay!". Just then, inspiration! What if the moonbase was the window, and a giant asteroid was the baseball? The kids would flee from the moonbase, and when they'd all be gone, he could somehow make the asteroid disappear! Hmmmm......
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Post by delightfulologist1 on Jun 11, 2005 0:02:33 GMT
The Barney connection was hilarious!! I'm so glad I'm not in that guy's shoes.
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Post by fluffturf373 on Jun 11, 2005 0:46:49 GMT
Yeah, that Barney spoof was quite funny! Keep it up, Makuta!
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Post by makuta on Jun 26, 2005 23:43:31 GMT
I'm sorry that I'm taking so long to write the next chapter! I made a new friend and people keep coming over, I've started all kinds of new projects not related to this site (giant homemade board games, writing comic books, making quizzes with my new quizilla account, digging through my old stuff) Every time I get inspired to write the next part, something grabs my attention, and I get writers block! There's way to much going on around here. Maybe I'll write it when everything calms down.
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Post by kylohk on Jun 30, 2005 4:47:03 GMT
This is great so far. The key to beat an enemy is to think from his perspective.
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Post by delightfulliod on Jul 12, 2005 4:12:08 GMT
The Barney connection was hilarious!! I'm so glad I'm not in that guy's shoes. Ya! I never thought Numbuh 86 could be so sadisdic. That poor teen is going out of the Decommission Chamber foaming at the mouth at watching that tape  |
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Post by makuta on Jul 18, 2005 21:47:11 GMT
Thanks for waiting while I was being lazy! ;D Here's the next chapter:
"Yes, yes, that's it!" Father conived, "I'll use their KND technology against them! I'll make them think something's coming!" Just then, his Delightful minions walked into the room. "Delightful Children? I have a mission for you!"
Their smiles faded and they looked at the ground saying, "But we..I..."
"Look! I am your Father..."
Lenny's eyes suddenly lit up with fear. "What?! Noooooooo!" The tall boy slapped him to get him to be quiet.
Their dad continued, "so you have to obey me. No buts!". The five little ones listened with sad puppy eyes. "I have devised a new plan to get into the moonbase, and I need your help as always. Here's what we're going to do..."
Hours later...
"And that, my children, is the meaning of life." The blonde boy, who was only half awake said, "Donuts?!" "I knew it...",the braid girl yawned.
The sun was already down, and it was way too late to go on their mission, so they went to bed. They had terrible dreams that night. Dreams of mutated monster donuts and athlete's foot that they had heard about in Father's speech. Not one of them remembered the plan the next morning.
Sorry it was so short! I have the summer lazies.
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